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I miss you ( Short Poem )
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I miss you ( Short Poem ) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I miss you Day and night, Don't know What will I do Without your love, I miss you Day and night, Dreaming of you Day and night, Cause right now, I'm missing you so bad, I feel so sad, When I think of you, Day and night, I miss you so, Day and night, I miss you, I miss you so much, Hope you're missing me too, |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Vandana, How touching and sad. You have expressed this so well. Nice writing. I can relate to the way you are feeling. Hope you find happiness. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
wow...very emotional.. thanks for posting.. chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
It's all right that you're short Vandana... (feeble attempt at a joke.. *smile*) nicely done, enjoyed. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
How said, Vandana. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Vandana~ beautifully done but very sad. i know the feelings you have penned here all too well. please take care. amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Hi Vandana -- mournful poem -- sweet and touching ~netswan |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I had to comment on this one because it reads like the blues, and I know every word is singing in my heart, and you have inspired me to play a little better tonight. Thank you for putting me in the mood Olias |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
True loneliness is being apart from the one you love  Best wishes, Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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