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Jerry Mcguire
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0 posted 2000-06-17 03:05 PM



In 20 days I will get to see my lil angel, my love,
Lights are shining on me from the Lord God above,

All my life I have looked for the perfect woman for me,
I talked with alot women but none have matched the light  I see,

I have loved her the beginning from the very start,
That is why I give her all I have that is in my heart,

We have both had share of hurts and we have paid tolls,
Now its time for us to finally meet and unite our two souls,

I have loved you tammie from the very start, from day one,
In 20 days, we start journey where forever could finally come.

© Copyright 2000 Jerry Mcguire - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-06-17 04:34 PM


I'm sure she liked this, Jerry! This is very sweet--good luck to you!

Elizabeth


I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



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2 posted 2000-06-18 03:00 AM


Just wonderful!   Congratulations.


Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"



JamesMichael
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3 posted 2000-06-18 06:39 AM


The title is cool...20 Days Until Forever..life can be so sweet sometimes..I hope you and tammie find a lifetime of forevers.  James
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