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Jerry Mcguire
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0 posted 2000-06-17 02:42 PM



I want to let u know that this not a game,
I have been through that and I know the pain,

I want you know how thought that I feel,
And I want you to know that I'm for real,

I want you to know how much love I can bring and give to you,
And how I will be there for you, brightening your days when your blue,

If this is a game, I plan to win, and you will win too,
Cause we will walk hand & hand and all our dreams will come true.

© Copyright 2000 Jerry Mcguire - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-06-17 04:45 PM


Very nicely said, Jerry!

Elizabeth


I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



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2 posted 2000-06-17 05:08 PM


Jerry,
I really liked this piece. You
expressed your heart well. I look
forward to reading more of your work
in the near future.
take care,
amy  


"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




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