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Passions of the Heart
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Passions of the Heart |
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Jerry Mcguire New Member
since 2000-05-21
Posts 5 |
Hunger feeds the passion that is felt within, Lust fills the desires fulfilling the naughty sins, Love flows from heart to those we care for, The love that fills our soul, like rain when it pours, As our soul fills and it leaves us wanting give more, Sending out the chain of love opens many doors, Don't let the door close on those we love and never let them part, For then u will have key that leads to the passions of the heart. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Jerry, nice to see you here. You've been a member for a few weeks so I won't welcome you to the family on this your first post. Please check your email for a special message.  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good poem need to find that key to unlock the passions of the heart. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Short and Sweet. I like this piece a lot. Welcome to Passions  ~Sheri |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Love flows from heart to those we care for, The love that fills our soul, like rain when it pours, As our soul fills and it leaves us wanting give more, Sending out the chain of love opens many doors, intense. wonderful poem. look forward to reading more. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde ----- |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this was beautiful. i really liked the last line, wonderful expression. take care. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions, Jerry -- sweet poem full of passion ~netswan |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Very nice indeed! Coco |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this poem meant everything to me, what you expressed about doors, key and closing. it touched me Kathleen "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Welcome to Passions!! A powerful message you have penned here with excellent advice, thank you for sharing this~ |
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