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The Night of No Goodbyes
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The Night of No Goodbyes |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"The Night of No Goodbyes" In mist of morn, awakens she to falling floods of rain his words have poured from Heaven's roof a trickle, a fresh'ning refrain Shared syllables thrown on potter's wheel, a dizzying dared discourse 'tween maiden fair and valiant masterful knight 'pon poetic horse She breathes from deepest dreaming silks as lilac sky prevails to cling to earth's arising scents the fragrance of filling sails And as the sands of lands afar are shed from out her eyes awake she now, her drowsy head, from the night of no goodbyes Claire |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Claire, a beautiful poem filled with loss and sadness. She breathes from deepest dreaming silks as lilac sky prevails to cling to earth's arising scents the fragrance of filling sails And as the sands of lands afar are shed from out her eyes awake she now, her drowsy head, from the night of no goodbyes wonderfully written, thanks for sharing. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde ----- |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Claire! Lovely to see you here. Your poetry is always full of the most wonderful imagery. This is magnificent!!! (hey! check out the Voices on the Web..I'd like a chance to vote for your poetry!!) |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Tis truly a pleasure to have you once again grace us with your poetry Claire... Exqusitely written my poetic friend. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"tween maiden fair and valiant masterful knight 'pon poetic horse." Lovely writing Claire....Nice to see your writing again....James |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Brian, thank you for reading. Mostly this was an attempt to express a loss of fantasy, an awaking from a dream. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Ms. Poetde, a special thank you for your encouragement of late...I will look at Voices on the Web. Thanks for reading this one.  Mike, your eloquent kindness is just what I needed today...thank you! James, and so nice of you to let me know you enjoyed this...thank you, sincerely. ~ Claire |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow - this dances. You have exquisite rhythm in here, and wonderful imagery. Well done! K |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Lovely Muse Coco |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Meadowmuse, Beautiful poem, beautiful words, beautiful thoughts. *L* |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Claire, It's great to have something of yours to read again. Mike |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You know how to weave, that is a fact!! Thank you for sharing your lovely work with all of us~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She breathes from deepest dreaming silks as lilac sky prevails to cling to earth's arising scents the fragrance of filling sails And as the sands of lands afar are shed from out her eyes awake she now, her drowsy head, from the night of no goodbyes ---------------- brown eyed girl is smiling  welcome "home" love this poem... a different style for you... you wear it well. take care C, jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving (How one move just puts me by myself) There you go just trusting someone else (Now I know I put us both through hell) ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong (I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me) And I'm not sayin (We ever had the right to hold on) (I just didn't wanna let you get away from me) ~MB20~ She says baby, It's 3AM ... I must be lonely, When she says baby, Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes, Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it. ~MB20~ |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I've missed your poetry greatly, Miss Meadowmuse. And you never dissapoint, and this is no exception....deeply moving, gorgeous, and sorrowful. I think I shall have to go back and read it again. Wonderful work. *Krista Knutson* "Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~ "We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I have missed you too...and this beautiful poem is exactly why... |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
MM, O.K. now , how do I say how much I liked this? "How much I liked this !" Doc |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
A beautiful magical poem, wonderful imagery displayed Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Severn, Coco, Seymour, bsMike, Butterflies, Janet Marie, Krista, serenity, Doc Moose, Tracie...Thank you all, in earnest, for your kind, enthusiastic responses! You folks make me feel so at home here, and I am awfully glad and ever grateful to be back. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
As always dear Claire, you stolen my heart with your words... wonderful piece.. chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Claire, this is so beautiful, and it is very nice to see you back! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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pyro Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 12 |
well this is simple lovely i really enjoyed it i am new here and there seems to be nothing but pleasant surprises i enjoy your poems everyone but may i ask one favor? i have just posted one called depression please read it and tell me what you all think your oppinions matter to me pyro |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Chris, and as always, I thank you for reading. (didn't steal it, just borrowed it for a bit, okay?) Elizabeth, thank you...it is awfully nice to be able to share with you all again. Pyro, Welcome to Passions, and thanks so much for reading...I will look for your poem! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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FlyHigh Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 84Bekkestua, Norway |
Oh, so nice.. *worship more* Geir Jakobsen -- "Luck affects everything. Let your hook always be cast; in the stream where you least expect it there will be a fish." Ovid (BC 43-18 AD) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Superb my dear Claire, as always. . . I've noticed your style changing a little these days. . . care to comment? Just wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
So many images spring into my mind, Im dazzled, each line a picture. wonderfully written Olias |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This flows so fluidly Claire! Simply enchanting imagery ... truly beautiful! Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Claire, As I echo most of the feelings above, I can state that I enjoyed this one immensely... Great flow, and enchanting images... ------- In mist of morn, awakens she to falling floods of rain ... awake she now, her drowsy head, from the night of no goodbyes ------ regards, sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Geir, you are far too kind...thank you.. Sven, do you think? Perhaps if you would be so kind as to share with me your observations, I may be able to comment. I see no significant difference, on my own, but could that be perhaps that it is often hardest for the writer of the words to see them objectively? Please feel free to e'mail me, as I haven't got ICQ. Olias, thank you, sincerely, for your encouraging response. Kit, I thank you for reading and letting me know. Sudhir, for the "enchanting" you have my thanks and regards, as well. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Claire--your poetry always touches me like no other can...you write from precious spirit..take care of it. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful writing, as always, Claire! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ You KNOW I like ! Lovely phrases from your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Everthing you write is so beautiful This is superb Liz |
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