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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2000-06-16 07:28 PM


A serious subject this title I've penned
could be taken as thus ... but then again
There's enough of that stuff in the everyday world
I'd rather splash ink with a child-like swirl !

And wonder out loud at the mess I've created
abstracts of thought not too long contemplated
Fresh from it's nap , the pencil awakes
the paper stares blankly , what path will it take ?

To discover the wonder in something mundane
can I get there by boat , or should I take the train ?
Who was that masked man in the conductor's cap
with lightning quick speed and a loud thunderclap ...

I'm whisked to a place with a candle-lit glow
faint memory traces of tassels and bows
'Round a tree with a star lay great gifts all un-opened
their colors by far much more than I'd hoped , then...

I'm back , and the page now no longer is blank
given reasons as this , I exist , and say " Thanks!"


© Copyright 2000 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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1 posted 2000-06-16 07:57 PM


Applause!!!

love it!

Mike
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2 posted 2000-06-16 08:31 PM


Yep, this one I like.
Denise
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3 posted 2000-06-17 08:09 AM


You were born to write!   It's so much fun, too, isn't it!?

Denise


brian madden
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4 posted 2000-06-17 12:30 PM


I'm whisked to a place with a candle-lit glow
faint memory traces of tassels and bows
'Round a tree with a star lay great gifts all un-opened
their colors by far much more than I'd hoped , then...

I'm back , and the page now no longer is blank
given reasons as this , I exist , and say " Thanks!"

great poem, really enjoyed reading this.

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"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.

"Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso

"We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde


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tracie66
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5 posted 2000-06-19 06:21 AM


Most wondrous writings  
Thankyou for sharing this, it was an absolute pleasure to read.
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Dr.Moose1
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6 posted 2000-06-19 05:30 PM


Doreen ,Mike , d , Brian , Tracie ,
Am so glad you all enjoyed . Thanks for the R&Rs , I will try to return the favor .
Doc

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