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Parker
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0 posted 2000-06-16 07:04 PM


Never a Dull Moment

Well don't tell me about this and that
Do you really think I want to know?
Who made you the conductor, Dah
If I wanted your opinion, well
I'm not really that cheap…

No I'm not just shooting off, at the handle
You've got an answer for everything
If you really knew it all, well look at ya
You are pathetic, with that high brow raised
Do you think they care, they don't listen?

I should just cut you loose, slam outta here
No I wouldn't miss you, it’s a new me then
The things I could do, your holding me back
You know it; you've known it for years
Full steam ahead, not turning back, no regrets

Yes, I think its about time, a new me,
I'm sorry, it may seem heartless, I know,
The fact is that I don't love you anymore
I haven't for a very long time, it's gone
You just don't shine in my eyes anymore

Well I guess its time, have your last look
You won't be sleeping there anymore,
Well then see ya, and thanks for the memories…
Yeah! Never a dull moment…
Looking in that mirror before your next haircut.

Parker

(Never a dull moment when you've got nothing to
Write!)



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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2000-06-16 07:13 PM


Parker-man...
me thinks you need some inspiration ...
me thinks you know where to find it...

you better be careful admitting that you talk to yourself in the mirror
or that new guy Freud will be sending ya to the couch ...

later-good looking gator...
love the haircut  


 It's amazing
How you make your face just like a wall
How you take your heart and turn it off
How I turn my head and you lose it all ...
And it's unnerving
(How one move just puts me by myself)
There you go just trusting someone else
(Now I know I put us both through hell) ...
I'm not sayin
That there was nothing wrong
(I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me)
And I'm not sayin
(We ever had the right to hold on)
(I just didn't wanna let you get away from me)
~MB20~

She says baby,
It's 3AM ... I must be lonely,
When she says baby,
Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes,
Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it.
~MB20~


Marina
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2 posted 2000-06-16 07:26 PM


Gee James.....if you didn't have any inspiration for writing something new, I could have helped you.  You could have wrote a poem telling everyone how sweet, kind, beautiful,innocent and wonderful I am.  But....you are probably right...you won't want to embaress me with all that attention.  Yes, it is probably better that you just wrote a poem about absolutely nothing because you don't have a real life.

And I am going to stop now before you kill me!!!!!!!   LOL

Perhaps you should visit the good DR., or maybe he will find you.      

Marina


[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 06-16-2000).]

Parker
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3 posted 2000-06-16 10:41 PM


Damn-it Janet, that Freud guy ain't got nothing on me, did you say couch, yes I need some inspiration...  

Marina, getting into the dry wine again, that dry sense of humor works well for ya...... NOT.
Your so funny.... NOT.


Parker



[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 06-16-2000).]

SEA
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4 posted 2000-06-16 10:48 PM


Parker~ You're silly and this was fun to read.   -SEA
Marina
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5 posted 2000-06-16 10:59 PM


Well jealousy will get you nowhere.  You just can't stand to admit that I have a far superior sense of humour then you .....that's all!  LOL  
Parker
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6 posted 2000-06-17 01:28 AM


SEA, thank you silly is as silly does....  

Marina.........NOT... dream on.


Parker

MagnoliaBlue
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7 posted 2000-06-18 02:32 PM


Oh my,Parker...

Don't you hate it...
the feast or famine
phases that writers go
thru.

When you are wide awake
and ready...no words come
to save your soul.

When you are tired and just
really need sleep...your mind
is busy with all the poetry
and prose just dying to be put
on paper.

I hope the ' feast' strikes you
soon Parker!



MagnoliaBlue


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~*My Skipper Jim,
I love you

Parker
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8 posted 2000-06-18 11:16 PM


MagnoliaBlue, yes you just know how it is, sometimes just blank. So thats when I get stupid...lol

Parker

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9 posted 2000-06-19 07:15 AM


Parker, love~
You can find some inspiration in just
letting your mind wander ....
Find a rain puddle and dance in it.
Run naked through the mist of the evening.
Hold a child in your arms
(or a puppy will do).
Watch the moon outdance the stars ...
or better yet ...
dance under the moon and the stars.
Love ya' ...
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Corinne
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10 posted 2000-06-19 10:41 AM


Well, we all have our dry spells, I'm having one right now too, Park.  But when I read this, I thought I saw a duality, a hidden meaning.  I wonder...

Corinne

Parker
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11 posted 2000-06-19 05:01 PM


Marge, thank you, its been raining alot around here maybe I should go run through a puddle....  

Corinne, some lines maybe, but then there random creations from my brain, and not related to anything that i'm aware of....I hope.

Parker

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