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Love on the net..... |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
I wrote this poem for a very special lady who I met on the net. We fell in love long before we met in person. We sent probably 100 emails every day for weeks and phoned each other 6 or 7 times each day. By the time we met we knew each other better than most married couples ever do. We now live together and are planning a family. We are living proof that "Love on The Net" really CAN work! You love me! Yes you love me Yet what I have done to deserve this? To be in love with you To me Is more than heavenly bliss To feel your naked body Underneath my fingertips To taste you and to touch you With my tongue and with my lips To see that look of pleasure Upon your glowing face As I stroke you, touch you, kiss you In that very special place That look is worth a million times Whatever I possess But I would part with all of that For just one more caress I explore you Every inch of you A journey of desire I cannot halt This burning flame I cannot quench this fire This fire that burns within me This ache I must address I need you I need all of you I will not suffer less And you You feel the same for me I see it in your eyes They glow so bright You need me I hear it in your sighs I feel your hair upon my chest You start to touch me too Your hands, your arms, your mouth and more You give me all of you Each touch unleashes passion Which never have I known Our love which started slowly So rapidly has grown And soon we are together Our bodies joined in love We fit so well together Like hand inside a glove This passion, Oh, such passion We want for more and more You wanted me then, and now I find You need me even more Your mouth It brings me ecstasy Your hands a glowing flame Your body reaches to me Now we'll never be the same Now it's "us", not you, or me, We truly are as one Our love may seem a pinnacle But it's only just begun And when its time to sleep at last Still we have to touch I couldn't bare to leave you I love you far too much Morning As you look at me Still I see that fire You reach for me And I for you Our bodies racked with true desire Again you show me Deep deep love You give me everything Our love which seems to grow and grow Is only just beginning And darling this is just a part Of the many ways we show The purest love within our hearts This love which daily grows A touch, a kiss, a look , a word Each one of these means more Than all the treasures in the world Which any man could store There's only one thing in my life One thing I want for mine You know That's right! You're all I want My darling Caroline |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
TO TOUCH YOU The purest love I'll ever know A love which daily, hourly, grows That is what I feel when I touch your skin A love that none have known before A key to open all locked doors A tear of joy A smile begins That is what happens when I touch your skin Each time I feel a fingertip A brush of cheeks A touch of lips A whisp of hair against my face I know that I am in my place This is what I know when I touch your skin I feel your body so close to mine Our arms and legs and hearts entwined I see your eyes And hear your sighs I melt each time I touch your skin To touch your face Or kiss your feet Brings me alive Makes me complete There's nothing I need Or could desire To hold you quenches any fire I have everything when I touch your skin But once I am there Holding you close I cannot bear to part We have but one body, one heart, one soul Which cannot be torn apart We are one when I touch your skin And even if distance is between us Still we are together I feel your touch So gentle You'll be touching me Forever I'm in heaven when I touch your skin xxx |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Hot Hot Hot!!! To love like this is truely a blessing....Cherish it above all else...let nothing come between it.....Great work...  Julie :) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Notlikely2~ Wow! These are sooooo hot! Great job! BTW~ Welcome!  -SEA |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Whew!!! Excellent work....I guess you were inspired!!!! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
Thanks to JulieAnn, SEA and peppermint35 for your kind comments and the warm welcome. It's true, I was inspired, by the most beautiful woman in the world!! Love is like the measles.....the older you are, the harder it hits you! |
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ynotme? Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 17 |
WOW! WOW! WOW1 What else can I say??? Such passion.....she must be very special!!! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wow You just my screen on fire. HOT! but all the same very tender. This poem just flows beautifully written I can see your love is very special and wish you all the best in the future. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde ----- |
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ynotme? Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 17 |
I meant to ask...did you really meet on the net? |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Hot and spicy poem , Congrats on having a wonderful love like this I wish you all the best in the future with your family |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Wonderful poem, true passion I can tell your are soulmates, lovers and friends thankyou for making my day Olias |
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