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Tara Simms
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since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

0 posted 2000-06-16 12:02 PM



Safari into you

I took a safari in your jungle eyes.
Oh! The things I encountered:
I felt the tribal beating of drums
Within our quickening heartbeats
Heard the mating call of all wild things,
Felt the steam rising as
Heat enveloped me.
I breathed the luscious aroma of the rain forest.

My body responded to the hedonistic delight
That tempted my senses—
Moving rhythmically to nature’s symphony.
And then I saw it—
The dangers of loving you.

Pitfalls loomed ahead
Camouflaged in the flora
Dark spaces that played in the shadows
And threatened to swallow me whole.

I closed my eyes and escaped the jungle.


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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 2000-06-16 01:01 AM


tiz the story of life it is a jungle out there that is why i like to sleep sleep is good this poem is tooo yuh

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 06-16-2000).]

Tara Simms
Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA
2 posted 2000-06-19 01:58 AM


Thanks, Walt.

It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley



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