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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
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0 posted 2000-06-15 11:03 PM


painted pictures of you
now covered in dust
the locket i wore 'round my neck
beginning to rust

memeories come flooding back
we were so young
you and i out on the run

two lost souls wondering through the night
lost in a haze....too many demons to fight
stories of child hood we dare not share
the troubles at home were too much to fear

you were my best friend....
my confidant
my soul mate

where have you gone now
time lost
they tore us apart
we had eachother to lean on
what came of your life?
in the end who won?

you rescued me from sadness
our troubles were the same
why did they say that we must take the blame?

we never asked for their abuse
still they gave it just the same
so now we are grown....
those days are gone....
no longer in their games are we pawns

i wonder will meet again..
the bond we shared..and thought would never end
to this day you are my friend
i hope you feel it in your heart
i am there even though we're apart....

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LoveBug
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1 posted 2000-06-16 01:02 AM


Friendship is one of the few things that can endure through life's trials. You describe it well.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-06-16 05:26 AM


I can feel strength and the bond you both shared in this poem and I hope one day fate brings you back together again.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
3 posted 2000-06-16 11:35 PM


Distance does nothing to thin the connections formed in a real friendship.  You did a lovely job with this one.

 Peppermint
Life is a Wheel

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