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The return |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Well I'm back and had a wonderful time. The return The mountains cut the light to low. The bombers stood straight in a row, Stirring engines threw mist in flow, That mixed with gray cold ice and snow. I remember pain like nettles, Skin held fast to ice cold metals. The show of small green cockpit bright, Aurora quivering colored light. Time has sown a multi dome, Time with fantasy as a comb. Ever probing the shadows eye, Ever dredging the past gone bye. Lost happenings covered in snow, Forever packed in ice below. Sweet youth borrowed, lived, lost. Sweet youth under perma frost. And northern lights still play today, Just as they did those yesterday. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, What a beautiful picture you have painted here my friend, so much enjoyed it. Love, Cerenity |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
SY is back and we've missed him so dont ya leave us again NO NO NO missed ya my poetic pal  wonderful imagery in this... me thinks you went somwhere cold LOL welcome home Sy-gator jm |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome back! I hope your trip was great..but we did miss you here!! Next time we have to go with you ok?  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Brrrrr Dear Sy good to have ya back  Liked your poem, great imagery Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, So nice to have "The Poet" back Missed you and your beautiful work Liz |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sy, Well that was refreshing ! Think I'll go thaw out with a nice hot cup of java . Doc |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm reeeeally glad you're back - I needed a "Seymour Fix".... This one's a bit chilly, isn't it??? Be warm, my friend..  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dearest Seymour~ I'm glad to see you back. I can just imagine the memories you stirred to recall on your trip. Bless you. Welcome back, my friend. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Hey Seymour, great to have you back. How was your trip??? great images, you have woven and knitted together here... was definitely worth waiting... regards ,sudhir My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself, Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night, Still there are the questions, no answers in sight Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor, Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door... You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange ~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I imagine this piece will be the tip of the iceberg in bringing forth some lovely pieces, Sy...welcome back, we missed you and your wit... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ this is great! glad you're back, hope you had a great time! -SEA |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Beautiful imagery, and so glad to see you back! Corinne |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Welcome back...your poetry has been missed at least by a Kansas farm boy... wonderful read to re-enter the Forums... |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Welcome back Sir Tabin... Seems you've been to the colder parts of this world. Liked the read, especially the last stanza... "sweet youth under perma frost." Yep! I do like that. Mine is all under desert sand. Peace! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cerinity-1, Thank you and I'm glad to be back. Janet, Thank you me lovely. Poet deVine, Why not, missed you too. *L* Tracie66, Nice to be back, thank you. Elizabeth, Bet I missed you more. Love Sy DrMoose1, Thank you doc. Nan, Can't say how much I missed you. *L* Marge, Love you too. Sudhir, Had a great time, wished you all could have been there. Sunshine, Love you too and missed you all. Corinne, Glad to be back. *L* |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Hi Seymour! Welcome back, it's nice to see you here again. Loved this poem--it was quite invigorating. *shivers* Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome back Sy, I missed you! Wonderful writing. Some memories 'stick' more than others, don't they? It would be nice if it were only the warm ones, but I guess that's not reality. Denise |
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