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JulieAnn
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0 posted 2000-06-15 09:39 PM


my life packed in suitcases
ready to go
in just a few short hours
i'll be leaving you know

life has been kind
given me smiles
along with it came heartaches
but worth it all the while

as clear as the sun is shining today
I will always remember your face
as cool as the wind is blowing today
I will never forget this place

i haven't got a dime to my name
just a little hope in my pocket
i know as i head off
my life will never be the same

i will always be searching for your face in the crowd...though i know i'll never find it
my heart will always ache when i hear something that reminds me of you

and when I look into their eyes at night
as i tuck them into bed
it is the memories of you that I will forever fight

i love you now and i always will
you are a part of me....a part of my soul
there is no other that will ever make me feel like you did.....some will come close but none will be whole.....so as you lie alone at night..take this with you as you dream.....my love is always alive for you....as hopeless as it seems.....i chose to allow you into my heart.....now i've lost the key
my love for you will remain...never to be set free

Goodbye my love and remember...to you i'll always be true.........

© Copyright 2000 Julie Ann Ferrer - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-06-15 09:42 PM


"So as you lie alone at night..take this with you as you dream.....my love is always alive for you....as hopeless as it seems..." I loved those lines, they really spoke to me, JulieAnn. Beautifully expressed here.

Elizabeth


 I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



SEA
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2 posted 2000-06-15 10:18 PM


JulieAnn~ this is sooooo sad. I hope it all works out for you.   -SEA
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