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Open Poetry #8

piece of mind

monique
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 369
Louisiana

0 posted 2000-06-15 10:41 AM

if i could i would
realize the wood
of my furniture is red
hot for my bed
in fire for Ted and i to mingle
in the middle
of spring valley
growing barley

wetting our appetite
for peace in flight
harmonious range
of rows arrange
soothing our mind
colorblind
to reality ahead
of us
in the bus
of destiny
to eternity

realizing i am no
poet i had to blow
in the wind some more
of my folklore
animated all wrong
for the world to see me hung
insanity in action
with the wrong potion

forgive me for introducing
my mind on the line pulling
the string so tight
aroung my neck right
under the tree in bloom
full of prune

monique

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2000-06-15 11:34 AM

I liked this poem very much, Monique!

Elizabeth

I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-06-15 12:24 PM

~Sounds like this just came poppin' right out of your mouth. hehe. I liked it's sound when read aloud. Well written and enjoyable, and quite interesting. hehe. Take care. *Peace.

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