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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 Neon Moon~*Marge Tindal*~ A Neon Moon is flashing brilliantly lovely light Wispy waves of purest lace softly dance in sheer delight 'Round nocturnal hemisphere surging tides of thought of you so very near Neon Moon ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
look at that... MARGIE-GIRL MOONED US   LOLlovely imagery margie me thinks you got it bad...and its so good later-swoon-moon-gator jm |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very striking presentation and sentiments Marge, you never cease to amaze me! Loved this much! Best wishes, /Kit |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ Love all that you do, this one... the moon...WONDERFUL!  -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ Thank you for the reply. Kit~ I so appreciate your sincere replies. Thank you, my friend. SEA~ Thanks, gal. Just something about that moon draws me out. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
The big, bad moon is all smiles up there right where he belongs glowing neon delights in bloom so full so cool A vague try to be a good copy-cat.... Even copying your style is so difficult... words are even more impossible... Many regards, sudhir. [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 06-15-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
A beautiful picture, and I like the star graphics too, Marge. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
very nice description of the moon.....your poem will come to mind every time every time I see it hanging up in the sky..... Julie :) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir It's a lovely compliment for me From you a different look at the same moon I see a she-moon and you see a he-moon How very, very ~ unique ~ Elizabeth What a lovely thing for you to say The stars shine around the glow of the moon Just the perfect thing to wear JulieAnn Thank you for the most wonderful of compliments on this I'll also think of you when the moon is in her glory again Love to all ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
ROFL@Janet...so I'm gone for a bit Marge- and you go around mooning people...what am I gonna do with you???? he he You know I love anything to do with the moon! And your presentation is always a beauty!!! Love ya girl...hope all is well on your end!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh Marge, this is beautiful! I love the imagery and the shaping. A wonderful poem, as we always expect from you! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
there's a bar round here called the neon moon if i see yuhs there i tip my hat to the lady for this fine poem |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
She not only mooned us she blinded us as well Seriously Marge a well written and presented poem once again from you...luv ya Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ Love you - and MISS YOU ! My end is fine - how 'bout yours ? LoveBug~ Thank you, honey. That old moon always gets to me. Walt~ Thanks, friend.  Tracie~ Glad always to see your reply. Puts a glow on my day. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
How did I Miss this beauty? Wonderful, Ms Marge!!! Of course I love This one! *Least I found it eventually!! Love ya!!! Love and hugs, Your Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~Ah~Little Lizzie You light up the night with a glow all your own Love you and wish you a Neon Moon ~Ah~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
This is great Marge, a lovely picture of the moon in both senses of the word, uhmm the word picture that is  Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge~ Sounds like you have been under the writer's moon again! I think that is what I need, a good long evening relaxing in the moonglow! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ahh Marge--the moon and you, compatriots of the night and love. Lovely poem! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautiful Marge, hauntingly beautiful. "monuments put from pen to paper turns me into a gutless wonder" Manic street preachers |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eric~ So very glad you enjoyed it. TerryW~ Yes, my friend ... the moonglow calls my name. I enjoyed your reply. Martie~ You and I are just a couple of 'moonbeams' waiting for a place to shine ! BrianM~ Thank you so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
your imagery is fantastic, not to mention you've got a great talent for visual poetry. very clever, indeed. without a doubt, i enjoyed it. i will see your words when i see Artemis outside my window and hanging low above the Vegas skies.< !signature--> We all got our demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. [This message has been edited by Ethan_Halo (edited 06-28-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ethan~ Thank you so much ... I do love to portray the 'artistry' of the objects that bring the words to my pen. I like the very thought that you will remember. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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