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Take It From Me....
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Take It From Me.... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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Take it from me I love you so Honestly~ more than you know Take it from me gently and slow take your time as I let myself go Take it from me I only have more for you, my love the one I adore Take it from me while I take it from you touch me in ways I never knew Take it from me this passion unable to tame with wild hearts beating scream out my name! -SEA- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA ! ~ Girl ... this is great ! You're a breath of fresh air in this corner of the world. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
whew... heating up in here this morn WOW SEA-girl this is GREAT!!!! very well expressed emotions!! oh yea...say my name ... OH YEA!!!  have mercy  LOLlater-sea gator jm |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ always sweet words from you, thank you!  Janet~ oh yea, that's how it should be!!!Scream out my name! LOL  -SEA |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Wow! I like this alot, very sensual without being...ummmmm... naughty??? LOL An art I have not yet perfected! Mine always end needing to be posted in adult Oh, and if I screamed out your name how would you know I wasn't just cheering myself on???? LMAO |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sea_of_okc~ thanks, I'm glad you liked this.....it almost turned out to be one for 'adult'......cheering yourself on???? You must be gooooood!!! -SEA |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Take it from me while I take it from you touch me in ways I never knew Take it from me this passion unable to tame with wild hearts beating scream out my name! very passionate...great poem. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde ----- |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You are a true sea breeze, breeze, this sizzles! Corinne |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Brian~ thanks! Corinne~ thank you! -SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Take it from me gently and slow take your time as I let myself go." This is enticing and stimulating. James |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~"enticing and stimulating" oh I like the sound of that! thanks -SEA |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I have felt close to these words before....hmmmm.....very nice work here..I liked it alot.....thanks for sharing.... Julie :) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sea, Well girl this is lushes, take it from me hehe,,,,, Love, Cerenity |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sea,...this is full of lusty mind dances. hehe. Well done on this one. Take care. *Peace. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful passionate verse SEA ... let's the mind wander a little further on it's own ... Wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Oooooooh SEA! I'm a little flushed! I love the way it built up into the climax, er, um, finale! Ahem... Very impressive piece! Trew. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JulieAnn~ I'm glad you liked this~ thanks Cerenity-1~ thanks! SpitFire~"lusty mind dances" very cool Kit~ thank you Trew~ I'm glad you liked! -SEA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Hi,there,I really loved this one.Keep writing!!!!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Right on Sea telling it like it is! Bravo good work! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vandana~ thank you! ethome~I'll always say how it really is....or should be! -SEA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, may you always find true happiness and passion to share with the love of your life, sweet friendf, this is lovely! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friedn, this is timeless in certification! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Get back in these pages already! She said burn ... together. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow Susan! I sure have missed your writing! |
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