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Open Poetry #8

cloud of confusion...

JulieAnn
Senior Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2000-06-15 06:31 AM

names without faces cloud my mind
in a sea of people yet noone around
in a world of confusion
spinning 'round and 'round

time stands still
the clocks are striking 12
the air is thick around me
as I swallow another pill

i thought of you
in the back of my mind
wondering what YOU would do

the chains that held me here
are now rusted at the links
you can't keep me in a glass cage
if that is what you think

i'm searching for my freedom
you fear that i will find it
i've been living in your kingdom
but you i will outwit

just stand there with that evil grin
i know you think you've got me
this is a game you will not win
it is time I set ME free........

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-06-15 07:40 AM

"the chains that held me here
are now rusted at the links"

It sounds like nothing can hold you back now JulieAnn! Really liked that visual above ... well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2000-06-16 08:48 AM

Hi JulieAnn,

Well this is really good, and I hope your freedom comes to you, thank you for sharing.

Cerenity

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