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0 posted 2000-06-15 02:03 AM


I see myself planning my own death,
for all the reasons not known,
Why do I plan to end it all?
simple, I plan to live no more,
In flesh I am pained,
I am  getting weaker every second,
not a moment goes by that I don't feel this pain,
hurt is the least of my worries,
no beacon of light appears,
scream of help from my mouth you shall not hear,
I embrace death as I have embraced darkness,
planning is done,
now the real show will began,
many have taken this road,
who am i fooling,,
this will not set me free
only bind me by the guilt of watching others weep over me




 Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

© Copyright 2000 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-06-15 02:04 AM


I have accidently posted this poem twice.

 Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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2 posted 2000-06-15 02:05 AM


go to the edit icon and click delete this post  
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3 posted 2000-06-15 02:08 AM


IT says only forum leaders are permitted.

 Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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4 posted 2000-06-15 02:41 AM


I'm happy to see that there is some light to the ending of this.
I hope that you find that light as well  



 ~Sheri

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5 posted 2000-06-15 02:44 AM


o yuh i forgot about that   ask a moderator (there are links attached to their names up top of the forum) and one of them lovely peeps will kindly delete the other for yuh..they are so nice for sure
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