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The Conductor (wayoutwalt freeverse yipe)
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The Conductor (wayoutwalt freeverse yipe) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Shaking one arm off to the east Shaking one arm off to the west The conductor of sounds begins Never ending remarks of beauty Not noted by the gentle beings will To please or to cause harmful tones There is beauty in all the world The conductor must bear it all Reacting to the beauty is man's fate Who sifted the great beyondness Not the gentle being the harmless The one who is blamed wreaks havoc Through the players in the symphony All well mastered in their trade Guided by his wand |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've "orchestrated" your free verse beautifully Walt! I can almost hear the sounds! Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I like, I like....cool freestyle. You do it well. The title there,..The Conductor....could mean sooo many things. Great poem. *Peace. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
hey, this is very good, Walt. Sending this back to the top. ~netswan |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Walty...wow... No inspiration hey? Looks like I came back in time...  K |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Waltzing with Walt.... Such a thought provoking orchestra... The philharmonics will be proud to have a few of such conductors... and even the Gods will be happy.... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ Now THIS is a great line ~ 'Who sifted the great beyondness' What an image is conjured. I enjoyed this piece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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