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Day Dream |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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" Day dream " Sky blue Clouds white Laying here Under air Seeing smile Laughter heard Birds fly Over head Sun shines Warm skin Glowing cheeks Grass soft Under skin Heart sings From within Hair Bright Face smooth Soft lips Upon mine Given yours |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Hi whisk, long time, I love the style of this, it reminds me of "stage right" To capture so much in such small fragments at such a rapid pace mimmics love in so many ways this is great, |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~" Day dream "~....Love how this read. A well written poem,....that I thank you for sharing. *Peace. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Whiskey~ I like ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Nice day dreaming whiskey  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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