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Magical Night
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Magical Night |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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The music fills the air of night Suddenly I am captivated by your beautiful sight Soft jazz is being played for you and me Your enchanting beauty is all I can see The sultry summer breeze caresses your hair Moon and stars shining high above Our bodies sway to the music The passion beginning to flare Your smoldering eyes look into mine As our lips inch closer and finally meet And my mouth is surrounded by the finest of wine Your skin glows from the summer night heat We dance the night away as if on air I can't take my eyes off of your face Everyone is staring, we make a breathtaking pair I'm enraptured by the very essence of you This is our special night, and our special place "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Finally it is my turn to praise you aim, This is beatiful, Im happy to be the first one to get to this piece Your smoldering eyes look into mine As our lips inch closer and finally meet And my mouth is surrounded by the finest of wine Your skin glows from the summer night heat COOL! hehe lata kev |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely sentiments and images Amy ... your words danced through this piece, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
INDEED...you do make a beautiful pair  WOW Amy-girl this is gorgeous wonderful imagery and perfect passion ... that muse of yours is RED HOT these days!! so happy for you love ya jan |
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Syntax Junior Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 25 |
This is a very romantic depiction of a sultry summer night. I just love dancing! Oh, that the girl here could be me! Syntax Each instant comes with a price ~ J. Wright |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A magical night indeed, well penned, Aimster! Good to document it in poetic form, so you have the memory recorded forever. Those special nights are few and far between... Corinne |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Done right from the heart. Great job! Very special night and special person such great memories. |
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