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I No Longer See The Beacon - cowritten by Lone Wolf
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I No Longer See The Beacon - cowritten by Lone Wolf |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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I want to thank Lone Wolf for honoring me with her incredible talent once again  I No Longer See The Beacon As I gaze into the sky tonight I'm wondering where you are If it would bring you home again I'd wish on every star My wish would be for only you To you my heart belongs I've always known you were the one To help me finish life's song Without the melody of your love The moon no longer shines The sky has turned to darkest black In the end , I guess love really is blind I no longer see the beacon Of the lighthouse that once was us The harbor is now barren So, where do I turn for trust? All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey and LoneWolf~ This is lovely .... keep cranking 'em out. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thanks Marge, I think we have decided to try to write together at least once a week. Glad you enjoyed it |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is excellent work. . . I have to agree with Marge on this one!! I think that I could deal with one a week!! Great poem. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Really wonderful Jeffery and Lone Wolf! I loved the imagery and sentiments in this, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you Sven and Kit Glad you liked it! All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a wonderful poem, another great collaboration Without the melody of your love The moon no longer shines The sky has turned to darkest black In the end , I guess love really is blind I no longer see the beacon Of the lighthouse that once was us The harbor is now barren So, where do I turn for trust? ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde ----- |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
First of all, I have to thank Jeffrey for suggesting we write another one...THANK YOU!! Love to write with you, my friend and one a week sounds great to me!! I think I like this one best.Thank you to all who read and replied. We appreciate the support. I am happy to hear you all liked it. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Woo Woo, you go you two! Wonderful poem -- glad you two wrote another one! Lovely, ~hugs from netswan |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow you two! This is incredible...filled with such sorrow. Gorgeous work, keep it up! *Krista Knutson* "Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~ "We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~ |
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