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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Temptation Attempting to seal vision from devious temptation. The bars of security easily succumb by soft words. Devotional sentence of love is probation of faithfulness. Rivers flow directional destination always focused. Living within objectives view. Baited they nibble slyly, taste of worm risks their survival as mans elation challenges. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Temptation is a hard thing to resist, although you may know how bad it is for you. You describe it well. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wow...loser dreamer. excellently written. powerful poem. Really enjoyed this. wow. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "You do not destroy an idea by killing people; you replace it with a better one". Edward Keating ----- |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very clever combinations of words Lost Dreamer ... I read this a few times, and really liked the feel! Well expressed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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