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Just another silly love poem called "IF"
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Just another silly love poem called "IF" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"IF" i fell If I fell in Love with you what would be my fate. Could I trust you to return my love or would your heart waver or hesitate. I realize everyone doesn't fall in Love at exactly the same beat or pace. So me and my heart will devote a little piece of our time to hope and pray and wait. If any other lover's come knocking on my door the key to my heart will say go away cause another makes his heart beat fast and sway. So if I fell in Love with you could you be true. and if you care will you let me know in some way and assure me before my hope goes away. Cause I know from times I fell before If all my hope fades away my heart soon unlocks the door. But only one word of Love from you and my hope would be restored. Jameslee@June12,2000 |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
James~ What a romantic little heart you have. This poem is very touching and soulful and I wouldn't say just another silly love poem because it's by no means silly. Tender piece James Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Romantic, tender, sensitive, sentimental....more adjectives, IF only I knew them all... this one is certainly not silly, could call it IFFY though  LOL, a stupid pun huh???Liked this one james... Regards, sudhir |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ this is so very sweet. Romantic guys are the best! -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you just need to be kissed for this one sweetbabyjames this is a beautiful, gentle,poem of longing hold on to your hope sbj... and it will hold your heart ...  later sweetpoetgator jm And it's good that I'm not angry, I just need to get over, I'm not angry, anymore Cry when you cry, run when you run, love when you love, represent the ashes that you leave behind ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Hey Jimmy, You obviously know the art of romance and because of it, you'll get another chance. Very good piece! Nathan |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
James, this is sooooo sweet this poem..IF Coco |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a huge small word IF! leaves the door open to all types of discussion. Extremely pretty poem, so well done! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
James, That one little word IF has said so much here. So sweet and sensitive. If it were me, I know I would!! Great writing my friend. Glad to see you have left room for hope. Beautiful writing. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Simply sweet, romantic and wonderful James ... hope and inspiration shine throughout (hope she answers). Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you all for your wonderful responses. I am at the place where I want to fall in Love with someone but I don't want to fall in Love all by myself. I would probably be better off pursuing a friendship with her and maybe the love stuff will come later. If it does happen I will be a very happy man. It is very confusing sometimes...because you can decide you want someone and if they don't feel the same way you start doubting the relationship. Should you stick around and hope her feelings will change or should you move on. James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James, yes it is true not love is a two way street. But if you take your time with (Lena?) she will appreciate you all the more. Marina |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Marina I am trying to listen to you and to my heart and take my time with Lena. Spent some time with her the other night and I told her I wanted to be her friend...and she said, what, you don't love me anymore...and I said yes I do but I want to focus on a friendship and let the love part happen slowly. She agrees with me so I think I'm doing good. You know another woman recently told me she would like me to take care of her sometime in the future...you know when she's ready...and when I thought about it I thought no way...that isn't what I want..I wouldn't want to spend the rest of my life with her...but if Lena told me that I would tell her yes in a heartbeat...and I mean whatever she wanted.... a friendship, companionship, if she wanted to be my lover, or my wife...the answer is always yes..yes..yes..yes... James |
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dreamy_eyes Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 67 |
You can tell this poem comes from the heart! Debs  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes Debbie from my heart to yours...thanks for you nice comment. James |
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