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Comfort, (for it's all i have...)
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Comfort, (for it's all i have...) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Be still. Breathe soft. My arms caress you... (soft wet whisper kiss) your eyes too tight to let in light... (I offer you to taste of bliss.) Take it. It is given free. You have given. Now receive... (if only love consist of wish...) Would frighten darkness from the night. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ This is lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*sigh* this is beautiful me sweet... a soft gentle whisper from those tender sweet lips of serenity who could resist not me...*smile*  me gots new chapstick too *winkie winkie* later-me-luscious-lip-gator lol jm And it's good that I'm not angry, I just need to get over, I'm not angry, anymore Cry when you cry, run when you run, love when you love, represent the ashes that you leave behind ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Comfort,...what a beautifully calming thing to offer. Wow,...lovely poem. *Peace. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mom, Janet M, and Spitfire---thank you for your kindness once again---your encouragement means much to me...(and Rich, this one was for you...I am here when you need an ear...) |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
i love your way with words, like a blanket quilted maze the words and meaning hiden in each crease, thank you for sharing. kindly, redheart angrybraids |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed your read!!!!!!!  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
And it's all that we require of you my friend. . . for yours is a gift that is easy to give and wonderful to receive. . . Excellent poem. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is beautiful~~~~ full of longing and a bit of promise I'd say!! If I know you like I think I do...it won't just be wishful thinking for long!!! (that's actually a big wink!!) Love ya sis~~~~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thanks to all--t'nite I hug me'self...for once what I intended written--well, 'tis nice, especially...I blush and glow...thanks. |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
i love this poem, had to say it again, especially the first verse, it is so intirguing. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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