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the promise land... |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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Does the rain sound sweet to your ears? does the thunder echo all of your fears? does the lightening sense when your near? do you wish upon the stars? do dream of places afar? can you reminece of days gone by? without it bringing tears to your eye? can you listen to a childs cry? and understand an old mans sigh? can you hear the butterflys sing? can you hear the angels weep? can you soar on an eagles wing? can you dare to take that leap? can you answer me my friend? can you tell when it's the end? are your fears all bottled up? with little locks to keep them shut? for if any of these things ring true.. please call on me when your blue.. i'll be there to lend a hand and together we'll search for the promise land... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JulieAnn~ What a wonderful line is this - 'can you listen to a childs cry ? and understand an old mans sigh ?' Why it's a poem by itself !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~julie this is beautiful! simply wonderful heartfelt poetry you write. i really am beginning to like your style lady. take care. Amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
I loved this poem. I'm not sure why, but it brought a tear to my eye. I guess we all need someone to help us find the promised land from time to time. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~JulieAnn,...this is just the sweetest. I loved reading this...and will again. Love every line...each of these little questions that you asked were so dear...and thought provoking. Thank you for sharing. *Peace. |
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