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DestinysCharm
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0 posted 2000-06-13 08:47 PM


Authoritative Hands

Authoritative hands
of duration
impressing smoothly,
sailing currents
of affection
into inundation.

Judgment is lost
in whirling reflection
pattern of play,
while exploration
takes on a realm
of it's very own.

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1 posted 2000-06-14 06:01 AM


Destiny~
An interesting perspective
of exploration. Nicely done.
~*Marge*~


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Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-06-28 12:17 PM


Destiny, there is something in this that draws one in...two reads here...I know what I see...I wonder what others will see...?
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3 posted 2000-06-28 10:12 PM


This is wonderful, DC. Very comforting!

Denise

Daniel_vv
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4 posted 2000-06-29 09:48 PM


An excellent use of words, and feelings. I must agree with "Sunshine".... and excellent poem.
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