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An Anniversary Song
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An Anniversary Song |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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An Anniversary Song < !signature-->You have bestowed upon me greatly those possessions which are stately, in thy thought and deed and gift of soul you’ve blessed me with an ethereal gold. So when I speak thus, “I am yours,” receive it as such, and be assured tho gifts of wealth are at my feet with you I am whole, so complete. A match of my soul to yours as one ~ in our two voices, a song is sung, my words in your heart, yours in mine see love in my eyes, and in God’s design. I will wear my smile with modesty the gift that you’ve bestowed on me so the world will know of your emotion, and see in me sincere devotion. For truly we are staunch soul mates which adversity could not negate and twenty years of mutual bliss resumes each night with your sweet kiss. Ah my love, my heart, my passion’s flame ~ forevermore I shall bear your name. 13 June 2000 ©KRJ Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 06-13-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Sunshine, this is such a treasure! So romatically sweet and uplifting ... I truly enjoyed it! What a wonderful love you've expressed. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
They say 'diamonds are forever' Then may I add that this poem is one of the biggest of all them diamonds... Beautiful words, true splendour... Karilea, I have thoroughly enjoyed this; a lovely tribute this one to you know who... Regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kit, just what I was going for...thanks! Sudhir...he's a diamond in the rough...and he's all mine... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~sunshine beautiful sweet heartfelt emotion in this. *wow* i loved it...seems you had some fun writing this one too?! take care. amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amy, if you knew him, you would know there is much laughter...and love... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Wonderfully penned. Enjoyed muchly. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Sunshine; a beautiful tribute to your beloved on the 20th. I extend my congratulations. This is one to frame in honor of the occasion. So romantic! Love, Ellie 02 |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, you keep talking like this, you're gonna give marriage a good name  I am so very happy for you. Feelings like you have expressed don't seem to be so common these days and I congratulate you for your shared happiness |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mike, thank you, glad you enjoyed... Ellie, I may very well do as you suggest, but first I need to find some old, parched paper...LOL... 'Deer, trying my best...these successful marriages take a lot of work, I should know, this is number 2...but I cannot contain the happiness, so just letting it flow forth! Who knows, it might rub off on others?... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Sunshine - What a wonderful tribute to the institute of marriage. Sounds like you two know how to keep things strong. This is just beautiful, I'm going to remember it for our anniversary....29 years, Oh, showing my age, did I mention that I was married when I was uhhh 8. This one certainly expanded the grin to a wide smile. Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just beautiful, Sunshine .... Congratulations to you two. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Great one Sunshine. Very well said. The end was perfect: Ah my love, my heart, my passion’s flame ~ forevermore I shall bear your name. Awesome line. Here's wishing the two of you the very best. Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
May you have many more happy years to come! Beautifully written my dear |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you everyone! And Whtdove, it's coming up...you're not late! I just got a little ahead of the game! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is so beautiful, Sunshine! Many more happy years to the both of you. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Very well done, Sunshine Just as I thought - there's more to love than most of us dream of - and you seem to know about it all - in reality or fantasy - one can not really tell! Again - WELL DONE! Deepak Menon |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Elizabeth, a belated thank you... Deepak, ah, yes, there are many facets to my character, just as in all of us...thank you again for reading... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
It would seem Congratulations are in order! this is just a wonderful way to celebrate your love. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Eagle One, thank you so much! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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