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~Together Again~ |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
~ Together Again ~ I think about when you held me The sweet things we used to do… I want those times back darling So I can lie down next to you. I want your arms around me As you hold me real tight… We will drift off to dreamland While day turns into night. As our lips come together I want your eyes to look into mine… Remember the things we shared As we spin backwards in time. I want you to look into your heart Find that you really love me… We are complete once again As we find our way to ecstasy. ©1999~CJB~ Pay a visit to: http://cyberageadventures.com You will love it! "A poem is just an expression of my life and heart."*CJB* ~*My Skipper Jim, I love you! Your Lady June*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful expression MagnoliaBlue! Excellent flow and presentation, a wonderfully romantic verse! Best wishes, /Kit |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
MagnoliaBlue, a beautiful poem, lovely and romantic. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. manic street preachers "Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair" "I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP "And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper. ----- |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Here's to getting together again...and here's to your wonderful poem. Said so softly...and with much beauty. Thank you for sharing. *Peace. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
MB~ I liked the title of this first of all. It's what caught my eye...that and of course the poetress who wrote it  this is sheer beautiful...writtenwith elegance and grace. thanks for sharing this lovely piece with us. take care. amy. p.s. I'll drink to getting together again  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A nice romantically soothing poem this, MagnoliaBlue. Cheers! My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself, Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night, Still there are the questions, no answers in sight Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor, Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door... You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange ~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream) |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
What a beautiful wish! Nothing harsh; simply romance. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
The joys of reuniting...finding eachother again were nicely expressed here...liked it much....good work...Julie |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wow, Magnolia -- was looking to see if you had a poem to submit the book contest. But, those this is not flagged -- I enjoyed it very much. You are a great writer. Keep it up! Back to the Top ~netswan |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Thank you all... I appreciate the comments very much. MagnoliaBlue |
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