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It all makes you think |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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In my dreams Envoloped in darkness Within a house That intended to portray The house of the dead Never seen in reality Ominous and cold A basket with clothes Belonging to my Grandfather Laying near the place of flames Awake I could see all of this Right in front of me I heard chattering of voices Looking up I saw outside There were familar faces Only two I wanted to see The others do not matter to me My Grandparents with love Aunt, Uncle and Cousins Not vanishing away A few moments later They entered the darkness Grandmother sits in a chair Beckons to me to come I am not a child This running through my veins She says sit on my lap I do as she asks Not understanding Not wanting to stay I woke up right then And wanted to pray That I would never have another Of these dreams come my way "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." -Unknown |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Whoa,...this is some chilling poetry here. Goodness you have set the scene well. Had me right there with you. Nice writing. Take care. *Peace. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow ... haunting and vivid ... well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Chilling, haunting, vivid!!! Looks like I'm getting away from all the mushy love stuff!!  Thank You so much for your comments!! Maybe I'll have to send more creepy poetry this way!! Bridgette [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 06-14-2000).] |
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