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SpitFire
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0 posted 2000-06-13 12:39 PM


Dreaming of Insect

As seemingly odd as this statement may seem,
I slept last night and had the strangest dream.
Now if you know me, you know why it's odd,
for restful sleep never reaches this bod'.
It all began with a pull and a tug,
from a fun and friendly poetry bug.
We boarded a train in the wee of the night,
on a journey to destiny???...way out of sight.
With nothing but my skateboard in tow,
where we were headed...I wouldn't know.
This train was of the luxury kind,
and no better guide could I ever find.
For Insect you see, ordered some beers,
"Drink 'em up" he said,..."wash away your fears".
"But I am not scared with you right now",
"Oh heck", he said,..."drink 'em anyhow".
I heard a rumor that's not too cool,
could Insect be "The Drunken Fool"?
So down the beers we did drink,
what would be next?...I could barely think.
Out from underneath his seat,
Insect pulled a bag of treats.
"Oh yum", I see wrappers of red,
and seventy three KitKats I was fed.
Feeling full and "oh wait a minute,....what's that?"
"Relax SpitFire,...It's just my cat".
You brought your cat upon this train?
Oh Insect,...where is your brain?
So away we rode to our trainride's end
alas we've arrived and to the plans we will tend.
Now if you could see what it was that I saw,
you would be standing with a wide open jaw.
For this is a park like I've never seen,
a skateboard heaven,....this must be a dream.
Pipes and table tops,...funboxes too,...
oh goodness,....what the heck's a girl to do?
Hooray,..it's the ultimate I wish you could see,
how happy this Insect has made little me.
Now only if I could get him to try,...
"I'm getting old",...he said with a sigh.(haha sorry).
The "Nolley" is a trick I wonder if he can do that,
Oh heck,...he's too busy getting the hairball from his cat.
Fun, fun, fun, is all I can say,
thank you dear Insect for taking me away.
Rail slides, and shove-its, and 360' kick flips,
Oh Insect,...you're all that and a bag O' chips.
*HUH?...LOL.
*Peace.



© Copyright 2000 SpitFire - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-06-13 02:02 PM


Me thinks he's truly hypnotized you Spitfire!    Loved the flow and rhymes within ... I'll have to return to see the reply! Great poem!

Best wishes,
/Kit

MagnoliaBlue
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2 posted 2000-06-13 02:37 PM


Well SpitFire...
This is the cutest thing!
I love the way it
flows
out
of
your
mind
and
onto the paper.
Great job.
Really sweet!

MagnoliaBlue


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EagleOne
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3 posted 2000-06-13 04:39 PM


I loved it! You have the most interesting dreams.  

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



SpitFire
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4 posted 2000-06-13 08:35 PM


~Sorry,...trying to keep this thing visible for Insect. hehe.

~Kit,...thank you for reading. Yeah,...do come back, I'm sure it will be interesting. haha  .

~Magnolia Blue,...why thank you sweetie.

~Eagle One,...glad you liked it and found it interesting. hehe. Thanks for reading and replying.

*Peace.

gothicmoth
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5 posted 2000-06-13 09:01 PM


This one was fun. I've been reading a lot about dreams and they're all interesting to me, no matter how weird. Thanks for sharing.
kat
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6 posted 2000-06-13 09:05 PM


SpitFire what an adventurous dream..lol. I loved the way your poem flowed and yes it should be interesting to see the response. I know, I've had my share of responses from a drunken fool. Oops! Was I the one who spread that rumor? Um..um..I think so  

hehehe
LOL
Kat

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7 posted 2000-06-14 12:55 PM


(SNAP! SNAP! SNAP! SNAP! SNAP!)
  
SpitFire! SpitFire! Wake up!
I think your having a wet dream..umm..I mean
a nightmare!
         "Zzzzzz"
WOW !! She's still under!!
With this power I can create thunder!!!
This could be fun!
Insect you’re a son of a gun!
But not a gun with a blank!
Who needs booze to get SpitFire tanked!
I could send her to a park!
Make her howl or bark!
Have her beg please!
How about a striptease!
She would dance on her board!
Make her start calling me Lord!
A swinging her hips!
Undoing all her clips!
Showing purple puckered lips!
Make her give me all the chips!
360's in her underwear!
Of staring people she wouldn't care!
Give her a little squirt!
OH BOY!! A wet T-shirt!!!
Have her bend over!
Doing endovers!
Nose wheelies!
Screaming pig squeelies!
NO! That would be cruel!
How about the sound of a mule!
With that kind of fun!
I'd really be a son of a gun!
WOW! What a fantasy scene!
Could this be my dream?
Maybe I'm under her spell?
WOW! What would she make me do?
I'd better hurry and send this through!
SpitFire you will keep these fantasies as
your own!
Do you understand?
        "*Peace"
(SNAP!)
That's a cute poem SpitFire! LOL
(SNAP!)
  
        "Zzzzzz"
You will wet the bed early tonight!
Do you understand?
        "*Peace"
(SNAP!)
Oops!
(SNAP!)
  
         "Zzzzzz"
I mean you will get to bed early tonight!
Do you understand?
         "*Peace"
(SNAP!)
See ya at the top!


JulieAnn
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8 posted 2000-06-14 04:14 AM


very cute and fun poem!!! it was a joy to read.....Julie
SpitFire
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9 posted 2000-06-14 12:45 PM


Insect, you naughty little hypnotist you.
My goodness, what the heck am I to do?
This all began with good intentions,
all this naughtiness you didn't mention.
A little sleep was all I wanted to get,
and now it seems I'm your circus pet?
Ha, Ha, have your fun - that's okay,
I'll surely get you back one day.
For when I do, you best beware,
I'll fool with you without a care.
*Ha,Ha,...love it!!!
~Have me laughing hard here~
*Peace.

Irie
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10 posted 2000-06-14 12:53 PM


Hey Spitfire, This is great! I absolutely love it!
And being a boarder my self, I know what you mean about a great place
to play. Though, my boarding is on water, there is nothing
like a warm, flat lake to ride on!  
Well done!


 ~Sheri

Trew
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since 2000-06-10
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11 posted 2000-06-14 01:38 PM


OMG!!  
I haven't laughed that hard in a loooong time!
Spitfire, you're a joy to read anytime.
Insect... what can I say? lol!
Keep matching wit, you two.

Trew.

insect
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12 posted 2000-06-14 10:22 PM


NA! NA! NnA! NA!
HA! HA! HhA! HA!
(SNAP!)
  
         "Zzzzzz"
I got her just where I want her!
What kind of fun could we stir!
Let's keep her on her board!
Wearing cowboy boots engraved "I obey LORD"!
Carrying a lasso!
A cowboy hat too!
Slapping her but as she skates!
Lasso"ng all the skaters for dates!
And if they say no!
She'll tie them up, then pull!
Drag them with her board!
Scream out I LOVE THE LORD!
This is getting out a hand!
How about full speed to the sand!
Into a castle with no hands!
That wouldn't be nice!
Let's send her on ice!
Skating goes with ice!!
But we gotta add some spice!
How about fifteen beers!
And train whistles she hears!
SpitFire! Can you hear me?
           "Yes LORD"
WHAT?
           "*Peace"
SpitFire the next poem you write will
be about your deepest desires!
Do you understand?
            "Yes LORD*Peace"
Now you will take me to bed!
Oops!
Now you will go to bed!
I think I'll leave that other one in too!
Do you understand?
                                                                                (SNAP!)
Hey! Who did that?
(SNAP!)
  
             "Zzzzzz"
Wheww!! That was close!
NAAA!! Nobody could be watching this
right now! Hmmmm!! Anyway!
Do you understand?
              "Yes my LORD"
(SNAP!)
You should get some rest SpitFire!
Loved your poem! LOL


Lone Wolf
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13 posted 2000-06-14 10:34 PM


Spit Fire,

ROFLMAO!!!!     This is too funny!!!  Is there something we should all know!!  LOL.  Great one my friend.  

Lone Wolf


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

SpitFire
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14 posted 2000-06-14 11:36 PM


Ok now,...you're in too deep,
for your true colors have begun to seep.
You are 'fresh' from what I can see,
but it's fun, so I'll let you be.
Although you're making me act like a fool,
I still consider you very cool.(knew that was comin').
Got me doing the strangest stuff,
Ok Insect,...enough's enough. haha.
A hypnotist, you do it well,
but I will get you I must tell.
So watch yourself, you little bug,
I'll sweep your butt right under the rug.hehe.
~Loving it~
*Peace.


Sigmund Freud
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15 posted 2000-06-15 11:30 AM


This is a very complex dream, and tell alot about your personality my dear.

First off, it seems you have a love hate relationship with bugs, this probably is from being force fed those chocolate ants I saw in the commercials the other day.. cut them out of your diet dear.

This discription of boarding a train at night, has many sexual overtones, probably a facination with the inner bad girl all women have. Its also seems to have a slight kinky nature to it, the all night riding of the train and the skateboard park show a very creative wild side in you. Also this is backed up by the connection to drinking all those beers... so obviously your inner party girl is dying to get out..... let her out girl, let her out.
You also seem to have a strong attraction to foolishly drunken men, when in this state, of course when you wake up you will probably say to yourself ...what was I thinking.. so beware....
Back to the park descriptions.... these just show the kinky side your surpressing and a desire to explore many fantasy adventures.
I'm very perplexed by "the Nolly" you extreme need to find some drunken fool that can do this makes me wonder why I've not met you....er I mean in group sessions before...no no not that kind of group sessions. Well you have to explore this with me in another session, I feel it need complete attention.
The over eating of chocolate bars is probable the reason behind these re-occuring dreams, cutting back may help.

Also the need to have all your friends drop by in this dream and remark, shows your desire to be the center of attention at bank lineups this is evident with all the little smilely faces that represent money and a need to say hello to all the tellers by name,
it shows a very friendly spirt, and probably gets you through the line faster and out the door.

You also seem to be drawn to men who hypnotize you with their looks, which seems to evoke strange fantasy flashes, this is normal except for needing to get back at this fantasy in some mysterious way.

conclusion: you are a normal and healthy female, and I have an opening next thrusday where we should explore this Nolly thing....
for scientific purposes of course.

Frued


kat
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16 posted 2000-06-15 01:44 PM


Frued, after seeing your response to SpitFire's poem I just had to come back and put this one on the top. This is just too funny!!!!!!  ROTFLMAO!!

Everything from the original poem to all that (SNAP!) (SNAP!) that's going on and your observation of SpitFire. LOVED IT!!! LOL


kat

Sigmund Freud
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17 posted 2000-06-15 02:05 PM


Kat, if your having the same dream, i'll just have to look in on you and analyze you too, first one is free.......

This obsession with the name Kat...hmmmmmm
very interesting.

Freud

SpitFire
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18 posted 2000-06-15 02:33 PM


~Now if I could stop laughing for just a second to get a couple of words out that would be so great. Haha.  Uuum,,.Freud...shoot!!!  When I saw you up there I knew I was in for it.  Ok, I found what you had to say very interesting lol...and ummm,,the Nolley...well, ok we can schedule an appointment all in it's own for that. haha.  Too much.  What the heck happened here?  Oh and no attractions to foolishly drunken men...haha..just ones that make me laugh.   Uuum,,..can't stay serious enough to say much at all....I think I'll come back.  haha. Thank you though for the time.....bill me.  haha....no don't, the check is in the mail.   This is too much.

~Irie, JulieAnn and Trew,...thank you so much for laughing...I mean reading. haha.
~LW,...no, nothing to confess....just having a little fun. hehe.  Getting way out of hand,...but it's fun. haha.  Haven't laughed like this in a while so it feels pretty damn good. hehe.  Thanks for reading. *Peace.  You're too cute. hehe.

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19 posted 2000-06-15 06:26 PM


SpitFire~ this is sooooo funny. Absolutetly fantastic!   -SEA
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