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With You (reply to A.R.H. challenge)
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With You (reply to A.R.H. challenge) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Old photographs of lover's fondest moments an Autumn walk through golden leaves of romance the kiss a smile can bring oh, how I love these things when I'm with you. A midnight sky with nothern lights a dancing the frost king's art on sunlit windows prancing a favourite song two sing oh, how I love these things when I'm with you. A seaside stroll by lazy waves at sunrise a gentle wine to warm the soul by firelight sidewalk cafes in spring oh, how I love these things when I'm with you. A rattling wagon on a moonlit hay ride a tall ship sailing on the bay at twilight an icecream sundae fling oh, how I love these things when I'm with you. This poem is in answer to A Romantic Heart's challenge to write about love after the initial infatuation of a new relationship. Celtrue2000@E3B1G9 |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ethome~ this is very very sweet! Heart touching!  -SEA |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I loved the style and flow of this verse Ethome ... beautifully romantic and sentimental, you met your challenge well! Best wishes, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you very much Sea and Kit I enjoyed writing it. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
oh my , how beautiful, I feel I am in love for the first time! loved this, you meet my challege well indeed! Thank you...write more Please!...ooh-la-la!! |
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