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As We Shed The Night |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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As We Shed The Night ~*Marge Tindal*~ From the shadows of dream you smile with delight leaving me alone as morning sheds the comfort of night Yet you cling to the very fabric of me stirring the day with sweet memory ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Marge, I liked this verse ... short but powerfully penned! The memories virtually cling through the day ... wonderful image! Best wishes, /Kit |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Marge, you managed to say so much in so few words. Beautiful work, my friend. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What a lovely Good Morning Mom...makes me want to change my nocturnal ways....hugs... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oohh, this gives me the feeling of the sheets still around my shoulders... GOOD! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Yet you cling to the very fabric of me stirring the day with sweet memory - excellent writing, my dear lady! Corinne |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Nicely penned, Marge, Loved this one...I wish I could learn the art of writing short and precise... regards, sudhir |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely, Marge!! Simply beautiful piece of writing. Your work is an inspiration to me...so are you! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Marge, magical and beautiful. wonderful verse. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. manic street preachers "Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair" "I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP "And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper. ----- |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I love the last four lines--they sound like a great way to start the day. Thanks Marge. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Ah, Marge. You make me wish I could sleep at night like the rest of the world. To wrap up in your favorite blanket and drift effortlessly off to sleep. Oh, what a wonderful feeling that must be. Thanks for a lovely read.  "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ This was beautiful. Sweet images you draw with your poetic pen. Wonderful way to start the day!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ Yeah, I think I kinda knew you'd like this one. Thank you. LoveBug~ Thank you, hon. Serenity~ Thank you, sweet child. I am 'daytime' challenged with intense nocturnal tendencies. Karilea~ Oh, what a nifty thought. Thank you, my friend. Corinne~ Thanks, my friend. Sudhir~ Sometimes brevity says it all. But, not always ... I don't know that it's 'learned' ... just happens. Lil' Lizzie~ I hope it 'inspires' you to pen another beauty. Brian~ Pleased to know you enjoyed. Elizabeth~ They are ... and I thank you. TennesseeAngel~ To awaken from the dream ... and carry the thoughts through the day .... is such a treasure. LoneWolf~ Thank you ... I like to begin the day with a lovely thought ... it refreshes my mind. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Marge to be this close and in love with someone is just so wonderfully beautiful ((sigh)) Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Yeaaaaaah ! Thank you, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Marge this is wonderful , So much feeling in little words , Ive missed reading our poems I look forward to catching up on what ive missed |
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Syntax Junior Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 25 |
I loved this! So very succinctly you have said so much. You can feel the romance. Nicely penned! syntax |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Marge, So much with so little! An excellent verse. I have been to see the world. Tasted life at every turn. And all the time your face came back to haunt me. -Chris DeBurgh |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Whiskey~ Girl ! Where ya' been ? Good to see you back. Syntax~ Thank you and welcome again to Passion's. Trew~ Thanks, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
MARGEEEEEEE! you keep me envious every day |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Marge! Denise |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Sometimes,if we are blessed, pleasant dreams DO continue with us to warm our memories for the next few days. Bob<>< |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CutiePie Kevin~ Tee-hee .... Thank ya'love. Denise~ I'm glad you thought so, hon. LightHouseBob~ Yes, it would seem that they often do. I feel blessed to recall the sweetest of them. Welcome to Passion's. I'm sure you will enjoy your stay with poetic friends. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
it is a marvelous feeling to be able to carry the dream with you. Great work Marge!God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ Thank you for your comments. Yes, carrying the dream is indeed a beautiful feeling. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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DONALD Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 10 |
HEY MARGE,YOU TOUCHED THE SPIRIT IN MY HEART* KEEP INTUNED WITH YOURSELF AND YOUR SURROUNDINGS FOR EVERYTHING IS A BLESSING IN DIGUISE,ESPECIALLY THE WORDS YOU WROTE. |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
Marge, This reminds me so much of my own sweet love. You must be very happy. Love is like the measles.....the older you are, the harder it hits you! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Donald~ Thank you for the sweet reply. Welcome to Passions family of friends. Look forward to seeing some poetry from you. NotLikely2~ I'm so pleased to welcome you to Passions. Yes, I'm usually pretty happy. Pleased to have stirred you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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