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angelswing
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0 posted 2000-06-13 07:16 AM


Love Bug .

Ladybirds with wings encased,
A solid outer shell,
Yet deep inside,
Emotions strong often stay and swell,

A ladybird,
A caring beast,
With feeling clear and true,
If only it could open up,
It would not be so blue .




 Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-

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1 posted 2000-06-13 10:19 AM


I'm proud to have such a beautiful and true poem bear my name!   Great poem, my friend.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

angelswing
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2 posted 2000-06-13 11:08 AM


Thanks, I think it's a cool name and it is good when used in a metaphorical sence aswell . I'am glad you thought it was worthy of bearing the same name .
L.of.L. Tom .




 Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-

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3 posted 2000-06-13 12:55 PM


~This is a wonderful, wonderful poem.  I love it...really,...I am not just saying that to sound kind...I love it.  It holds both beauty and truth. Take care. *Peace.
Enola
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4 posted 2000-06-14 10:39 AM


I've copied this, so you can write it in my book now, it's a cool poem.  

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.


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5 posted 2000-06-14 01:44 PM


"If only it could open up, it would not be so blue"...that was my favorite line, very true of a ladybug and of anyone...good work Angelswing!

Elizabeth


 I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



angelswing
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6 posted 2000-06-29 04:39 AM


Thankyou all, It is a funky little poem, that I am very proud of, I am glad you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writeing it .
L.of.L. Tom .

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