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Isis' Challenge-If I could change one thing.....
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Isis' Challenge-If I could change one thing..... |
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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. 
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If I could change one thing In this whole universe... This is what I would do. Even though it's selfish And so many things need to change I would change my life without you... Why? I cannot answer that Just that I'm so alone And I need you to hold me once again I want you to tell me you love me Want you to kiss me gently And together wait for the new day to begin.... If I could change one thing I would change your mind You would once again love me so But I know it's just wishful thinking Which leaves me continually sinking If you ever really loved me, I'll never know If I could change one thing It would be that you and I Would never again be apart We would go through our fights And make up even more But I would always have your heart So if I could change one thing Know that I would change this You would once again be there for me And through my tough times And your tough times too We would love eachother for an eternity. "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
i was thinking of saying something along the same lines as this. i like this a lot. and i know how you feel. "You are not special. You are not a brilliant and unique snowflake. You are part of the same decaying organic matter as everyone else. We are all part of the same compost heap. We are the all-singing, all-dancing crap of the world." -Tyler Durden "He who makes a beast of himself is rid of the pain of being a man." -Hunter S. Thompson "On a long enough timeline, the survival rate for everyone is zero." -Tyler Durden We all got somethin' to atone for. -Ethan Halo |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I don't think it is selfish the answers can be different if asked at different times of the day, or what mood you are in etc. No answer is right or wrong. I too feel this way. But here is a question for you, even if you changed this person, would it work? I feel that if you changed them you'd realise eventually you did it, and it is not the true them at all?? And then you may be no better than when you started???? Just a theory LOL And you are naughty you should have posted this is the challenge forum!!  Regardless it was a challenge well met  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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