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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-06-12 10:51 PM

When I awake
I think of you
I remember such passionate words
that escaped your lips
softly whispered in my ear
as you whispered ,your words
caressed every part of my body
such magic in your voice
such tingles I felt all along my spine

I lay there wanting you even more now that I know you.
I want to know you again
Learn everything about you.
That makes us grow even more connected
So we can truly become each others
desert.
I'll be your chocolate syrup that you crave
so much,
and you can be my whip cream. I love to delight you and take my sweet time
Indulging in every aspect of you.
Learning every part of you
Knowing where each little sensitive spot is on you.

Let me taste you and devour you with such passion
that you have never felt before.
Such delight that makes you melt.
You are what makes a sane woman go insane
with such joy never felt before.
I curl up in my sheets thinking about you
waiting for you once more.

I still smell your body that was mine
You smell so good on my pillow.
I snuggle ever so close
All cuddled up and bed
and fall gently back asleep
dreaming of you.

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 2000-06-13 01:12 AM

Truly beautiful thoughts here....I enjoyed this greatly.

*Krista Knutson*

"Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

2 posted 2000-06-13 05:17 AM

Man, this guy must be one hot number, huh? i'm glad you are able to have such feelings and have them returned. never let go of such rarity.

"You are not special.
You are not a brilliant and unique snowflake.
You are part of the same decaying organic matter as everyone else.
We are all part of the same compost heap.
We are the all-singing, all-dancing crap of the world."
-Tyler Durden

"On a long enough timeline, the survival rate for everyone is zero."
-Tyler Durden

We all got somethin' to atone for.
-Ethan Halo

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-06-13 11:22 AM

thank you alwye and ethan, sometimes my heart can not begin to tell what I feel inside. Oh by the way ethan i loved tyler durden gawd did i?

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2000-06-13 11:26 AM

Wow ... such passion Rosebud ... you are one lucky woman indeed! Lovely, expressive and romantic sentiments!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

5 posted 2000-06-13 11:34 AM

thanks Kit, I believe that lovemaking takes practice and lots of it.. and I myself and insatiable shall we say..

angelswing
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

6 posted 2000-06-13 11:43 AM

That was a very powerful poem, it had depth and meaning, I think love making and love although are to totaly different things make very good comparitive metaphors and I always say that - Love is not what matters, its how you express it .
I loved the poem .
L.of.L. Tom .

Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

7 posted 2000-06-13 12:55 PM

Angelwings I agree with you completely .Do men feel the same way? I just think that's what makes us women our feelings run very deep. TO me lovemaking is so emotional. I know I feel like i've went for a nice long swim afterwards but I could always go for another lap.

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