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*~Take A Chance~*
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*~Take A Chance~* |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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~Take A Chance~ Amy M. Kennedy dedicated to my inspiration Dry your eyes, I'm here now We'll get through this somehow Sometimes life cuts like a knife Baby unfortunately that's life Please believe I understand And put your heart into my hand And all of your heartaches and fears My love will make them disapear Ride with me tonight Take a chance and you'll see Our happiness is within sight Just let go and breathe I will give you wings to fly And I will catch you if you fall I'll pull the stars down from the sky You can wish upon them all I can feel the weight of your stare Your love is felt by me in all you do So love me baby, love me if you dare I'll forever love, protect, and cherish you When we are together, it's a union of the soul Your touch so magical, your kiss so enchanting Dreams can come true, you came to me and made me whole You captivate me, you are so beautifully breathtaking I will take this risk on our love But you must meet me halfway No matter what happens my dear baby I will love you now forever, always "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Wow...deeply moving piece. I loved this one. chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Amy - Now this is a beautiful tribute!  My favourite verse is: "ride with me tonight take a chance and you'll see our happiness is within sight just let go and breathe" "I will take this risk on our love but you must meet me halfway" Wow! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Amy, I forgot to add that you are becoming one of my favourite poets! Take care, Melissa Honeybee [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-12-2000).] |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Deeply beautiful and moving Aimster! I truly loved reading this....I think I'll go back and read it again! *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
good old fashioned in love kind of feeling!!!! Kathleen "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
awwww you guys are too sweet! thank you so much. i liked this piece actually myself too lol.that is rare. melissa you are such a sweetheart. thanks for the huge smile you've put onto my face. you are becoming one of my favs too. take care all. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I really liked this one....true love is like flying with wings and you expressed it so well....good work...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 this is one of your best writings to date.. must be one hell of a muse perfect poem amy-girl written for all the right reasons love ya jm And it's good that I'm not angry, I just need to get over, I'm not angry, anymore Cry when you cry, run when you run, love when you love, represent the ashes that you leave behind ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 06-13-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I'll pull the stars down from the sky You can wish upon them all" Wonderful imagery Amy ... I just loved this! It left me with a wonderful, positive feeling, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amy~ Just lovely ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
No matter what happens my dear baby I will love you now forever, always ......... of course AMY, you will and you will make love proud... your inspiration is one lucky guy, prosperous with the fact that he has this extremely sentimental and loving person, thinking about him all the time... Many warm regards, sudhir. My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself, Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night, Still there are the questions, no answers in sight Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor, Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door... You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange ~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream) |
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