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We need to talk
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
I guess we need to talk With our hearts free from fear Free from doubt,free from hatred Free from obligations, free from distrust Free from longing, free from pain, Sometime which may be far or near I'll wait 'til then even if its forever Sincerely A_L |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
So... you want to tell me whats bothering you? How can something so simple as talking be so hard sometimes? |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Sea I never expected a response though I badly needed one..thanks..You see when we talk we communicate with shroud which hides the beauty in her and makes it the same..when I speak I can ask only certain questions as a rule for if I ask or say something else..I dunno what may happen..I love her so much but talking with complete faith to build a relationship becomes difficult..but we're good friends and we've promised to be forever. Thanks a lot for your question. Sincerely A_L |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Excellent thought! and with your reply to Sea~ it makes the understanding of this post even deeper, a need to talk to someone can be as deep as the need for food or sleep....I know I've been here too  Good luck and thank you for sharing this thought and your work with us![This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 06-12-2000).] |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Thanks BDC for your comments and wishes..but its not possible right now..it may take li'l time. Sincerely A_L |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hey AL,... good to see a post from you. I'm not really too sure what to say about this situation except that it must be difficult. You have expressed this,...and well too.  . I understand how hard it must be to not be able to talk as freely as you'd like ...I don't know what I'm trying to say except that I feel for you, and admire your patience. Sorry for the reply that made no sense. Your poem has brought on much thought. Please take care. *Peace. |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
Hey A_L Loved the poem, short and deep... And I wonder if finding the right words to say is as difficult for you as it is for me sometimes... I find it easyer to write down what I´m thinking, gives me more time to think things over and not say the things I regret later that I have said... Anyway: Enjoyed reading this... -nando- Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I'll wait til than, even if its forever." Seems like a mighty long time, and so many others that may want to talk to you from their heart before forever arrives. A noble gesture that could prove hard on the happiness of your heart and soul.... So...I hope the time and place is near. Best wishes for you and yours. James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Y'know, I wish someone had written this to me, and given me time to think...and something to think about...instead of guessing about...I like this much, I thank you, in hindsight... |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Short and to the point - I loved it . The poem is very deep and has a lot of meaning and truth, I enjoyed reading it . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great poem great point love it and keep it up as always I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've expressed your sentiments well here Amazon_Lover ... it's so difficult to communicate sometimes, though try we must, to keep the doors open. Nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very well done! It's hard to avoid all those traps but I'm sure it can be done. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
A_L isnt it funny how we can write our innermost thoughts but when it come to actually talking we freeze? |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
You have expressed your need to talk so beautifully. I wish you all the best in finding a way to communicate with this person. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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