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Eternity My Love
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Eternity My Love |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Eternity My Love I kiss the hand of love Under Moon before the morn The battle comes too soon Our love so newly born… The King has called me forth At Glamorgan for he, we stand The Saxons shall meet my sword And freedom for our good land Have no tears my dearest love Have no tears of dire thoughts For I'll return to your sweet arms I vow, though death be wrought Mount Baedan turns red today As swords of men are waved In grasses where they were laid Iron sang of death it made Walk forth on hallowed ground, Where whispers of death be found The hearts of Knights are there In the weep of maidens tears Have no tears my dearest love Have no tears of dire thoughts For I'll return this day, In your heart my love will stay Little had she known An arrow found its home Bent he on shaken knee He whispered his love to thee This maiden lay asleep Restless and weary with weep ..Lov, I am long for holy ground ..Be strong our love abounds Have no tears my dearest love Have no tears of dire thought My life has kept you free In Eternity I wait for thee James Parker Haley © June 11, 2000 [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 06-12-2000).] |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Very good Parker... I can only weep!  Such sadness to win a fair maidens heart. Very Romantic.  MagnoliaBlue Pay a visit to: http://cyberageadventures.com You will love it! "A poem is just an expression of my life and heart."*CJB* ~*My Skipper Jim, I love you! Your Lady June*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
WELL...James Parker...I believe ye be a songster too...lyrical 'twas to me ears... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
MagnoliaBlue, thank you kindly. serenity, thank you, though my singing may not win any hearts..... Parker |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Haleyja, this is a great poem, although very sad  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
My life has kept you free In Eternity I wait for thee... Parker, this is quite sad, but very eloquently penned... Enjoyed reading this one. Regards, sudhir. My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself, Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night, Still there are the questions, no answers in sight Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor, Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door... You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange ~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~parker this was romantically sad. i see you can write MANY styles and do them very well i might add. this was poetic perfection at its best. take care. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
fair maiden shall not f'ever weep for thou Knight, thy promise to keep forever and for Eternity thy heart belongs to thee thy love is thy destiny. *ok ok cut me a break, its early and im out of rasberry tea  GROOVY poem parker man .. even in death ya make us swoon *smile* ahh Im running out of pedestals... this one deserves the ROYAL Pedestal... all who come before ye...must be on bended knee hehelaterswoongator jm |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Park, Sad ending here, a different tack from your usual poems, although in the next life they would be together, it is inferred, yes? Corinne |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Dark Angel, thank you. Sudhir Iyer, glad you enjoyed the read. Amy, thank you very much. Janet Marie, yes they should... Corinne, yes yes, Eternity waits for us..er I mean them... Parker |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Ok, get back to your own side of the street Pal! The death side's mine!!! LOL And keep away my witchcraft books! LOL Marina |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
The use to burn witches at the stake ya know. I've got a match somewhere here.....lol |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
Have no tears my dearest love Have no tears of dire thought My life has kept you free In Eternity I wait for thee This is just the way I feel right now... I love a girl but she does not want me right now...but it feels like I can wait for eternity... Thank you... -Nando- Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Very eloquent this romantic tale Enjoyed this poem very much Coco |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
I am finding these jausting poems hard to read, lol guess I am a twentieth century person...but the beauty in this one is hard to miss |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Tis very true my poetic friend. But my spells have worked when casted upon the one correctly......how are yours making out??? LOL  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Parker* This is an amazing tale you have woven. A touching story of love found and love that is lost...but in her heart this true love shall remain untouched and forever. Ahhhh Parker you are the king of weave for this type of tale. Thank you for sharing this~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Nando, you are very welcome. CocoBaci, thank you very kindly. Corazon, its easy to get into them, just put on some fine maiden lace, and shout to be rescued, and many Knights will ride to thee. Marina, I prefer age old romantic charm.. Butterflies, a stranger in my poems, thank you, I don't know about the king, but thanks for the sentiment..... Elvis has left the building.....  Parker |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I like you and this poem back on top of the pedestal later-swoon-gator jm |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Such a romantic and exquisite tale you weave here Parker. Enjoyed it very much. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was a beautiful and touching verse Parker ... the flow was superb, and the story left me aching ... well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wounderful poem, I enjoyed it . I love the way it flows and the story line says a lot . Thanks for the read . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Janet Marie, well thank you I like it on top too... Eloise, it is a simple tale, thank you. Kit McCallum, well I was hoping for crying, I'll try harder next time... angelswing, your very welcome. and thank you. Parker |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
nothing more sad than true love finding eachother and then death tries to still it away! James this one is my favorite...full of romance...love..and sadness... Your poetry always amazes me...inspires me! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-16-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
ARH, well thank you sweet poet, Parker |
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Eskendale Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 17 |
Beautiful, simply beautiful... I hope one day to hold the same respect for myself as I would for one such as you... |
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