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How can it be that I love you
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How can it be that I love you |
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Alina Le Ann Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 40INDIANA |
How Can It Be That I Love You How can it be that I love you When I have another love that's true We've been only the best of friends I pray each day it never ends But more than friends I want to be Tell me now do you love me With your heart and soul so deep Give me your heart to hold to keep Put your arms around me tight Hold me close all day, all night Help our relationship rise so high Make it glow like a star in the sky All these things I want so much To have your love, to have your touch Yet I still don't know how this is true How can it be that I love you Alina Le Ann |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
This flows very well and of a subject that I think most have wondered of....When two people have been so close as friends ..its hard to know if the other has progressed further into love.....and often sometimes it is overlooked. I hope you find what you seek. Best wishes It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This flowed very sweetly Alina. It must be so difficult to look into the eyes of a friend one day ... then into the eyes of a love the next ... how so indeed? Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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sarahC Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 84Michigan |
You have hit the nail on the head and looked right into my life.....Do you have a crystal ball???? Nice work!!  |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Alina The rhyming is good and clearly shows the decision you'd be reaching...I feel the same way not that I have someone to love but to let go of my friend who is in love with someone else..hard to let go off these feelings isn't it.. Sincerely A_L |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice poem.Thanks for sharing my feelings.This is what I feel. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
gosh are we ALL in love with our friends? lol...this situation fits ME TOO. *shaking head* beautiful poem with some very real expressions you have here. take care. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Great work Alina. Utterly terrifying how this relates to my own situation..word for word! |
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