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0 posted 2000-06-12 12:30 PM


So many lives lost
And I didn’t really see
That they were just people
People like me

I knew of the war
As we can all say
But it never really hit
Until that fateful day

We visited the museum
And we walked in the door
And I felt such pain
I’d never felt before

We all saw the pictures
And words, written with care
But then I saw something
So powerful there

A brush and a comb
I got to see
That there was a girl there
A girl like me

She giggled with her friends
Over all the boys
And she liked music
Her folks hated the noise

But in an instant
That all changed
Her whole world
Was rearranged

She was forced to a camp
In a place she never knew
And then, she was killed
Because she was a Jew

There are thousands like this
Did it have to be
That so many died...
People like me

Tears burned in my eyes
When I saw the flame
I knew from then on
I couldn’t be the same

I lit a candle
For all to see
That they were all people
People like me

(I wrote this after I visited the Holocost Museum in Washington DC. The candle I speak of is one of the candles that visitors are allowed to light on the "Wall of Rememberance", the same room with the Eternal Flame.)

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

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1 posted 2000-06-12 02:31 AM


LoveBug~
Hon, this is tenderly touching.

In the atrocities of the Holocaust
it is estimated that 1.5 million children were killed.
What a sad, sad blight on the history of any nation.
I'm glad you got to light a candle for
their memory.
Love you~
~*Marge*~





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2 posted 2000-06-12 11:48 AM


Marge, it's a terrible thing that it had to happen. It will always be a symbol of what ignorance and hate can do. Yes, it was an honor to light a candle in their memory and to take the understanding with me, always. Thanks for replying.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

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3 posted 2000-06-13 12:42 PM


That is a wonderful poem you wrote LoveBug!!  One person letting everyone know that they were just people the same as you and I!!  It makes me sad to think about it when I hear or see something about that time in history!!  What a wonderful dedication!!  

Well Done!!
Bridgette  

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4 posted 2000-06-13 02:04 PM


Written with such care and remembrance LoveBug ... a wonderful dedication.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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5 posted 2000-06-13 02:06 PM


LoveBug,

I know the feeling, realizing what happened to them.  Of all the terrible things that have happened in history, I've often thought about the holocaust.  I wrote a story about it, and nearly started crying.  Great poem though.  It offers us assistance in remembering those that long ago were forgotten.

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

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6 posted 2000-06-13 05:14 PM


This is very emotional poem and I'm very sorry for what you and your people went through. I wish you a better life in the future.

 Nathan

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7 posted 2000-06-13 05:37 PM


Sometimes we forget that the people involved in the worlds atrocities ARE just like you and I.  Real people, with real lives.
That was a very touching sentiment.

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8 posted 2000-06-13 05:47 PM


Thank you all for your kind replies. The responce to this poem just shows how this tragic war still touches us all today.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

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