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What Is Fate
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What Is Fate |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
What is fate Our fate may be written Do we know what we’ll miss How can we say we’re tempting it When we don’t know what it is When we meet someone in our youth Is it fate that led us there Another crosses our path in the future Is that fate and do we dare Is fate what comes to us easy Without struggle or pain Or is it what we make of it And what our struggles will attain Fate might will our struggles To prepare us for something more Perhaps to lead us somewhere For no one knows what’s in store For now and forever Fate will create our destiny We will try to mold it to our favor But in the end What will be Will be |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kat~ I enjoyed this look at 'fate'. I guess we can rearrange it ... but can't really change it ? 'Que Sera, Sera, Whatever will be, will be The future's not ours, to see Que Sera, Sera What will be, will be.' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Thanks Marge, I guess what I'm saying is that circumstances cross our path and it's how we handle those situations that determines our fate because that might have been our fate to begin with in the first place. I like the way you ended your response.  Kat |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Very nicely put Kat.. What will be, will be... |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
a lot of wisdom here.....very good interpertation of fate...nice work...I liked it alot....  Julie |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very thought-provoking Kat. Many of the same questions I ponder myself ... I love the way you've expressed it here, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
MysticalNights: Yes, what will be will be and boy do I want it to be the way I'd like it to be. Thanks! Julie: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it alot Kit: I have a feeling alot of us think about the same things when it comes to fate. Is it fate that certain situations are thrust upon us and then it's up to us make things work to our favor or are our actions already written as part of our fate? Well, we'll never know for sure, but the question will always be there. Thanks! Kat |
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