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A Long Kiss

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ethome
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0 posted 06-11-2000 07:21 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome


A long kiss on the lips with love all around you,
like gentle touching blossoms soft and wet,
is filled with a nectar to drug and blind you,
bringing glowing hypnotic waves from the chest.
A long kiss savoured is insanity flavoured;
a craving for dreamers to taste the prize
for yeilding hearts that send all human reason
adrift in circles of love in the mind.

A long kiss speaks, but not words you can conquer.
A long kiss sings, but not songs you can sing.
A long kiss sails on the windsongs of matter
caught up in the flight of an alien on wing.
A long kiss can torch your heart to continue
burning with fire long after it's over
a flame left roaring deep within you
a molten addiction invading the sober.

A long kiss can heal diminished duende
a soothing connection for those with a gift.
And words can't flatter those few precious moments
when there's time to enjoy true love from within.

Celtrue2000@E3B1G9
© Copyright 2000 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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1 posted 06-11-2000 07:26 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

ethome,

Great discription of a long kiss.  They are wonderful, aren't they?  It is like heaven on earth with one you love.  So soft and sensual.  Great writing!!  

Lone Wolf


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
JamesMichael
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2 posted 06-11-2000 08:55 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Excellent writing...what is consided long?  Five minutes....five hours.   I am waiting for that long kiss.  I love kissing...of course it has to be with the right one.  James
Aimster
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since 02-19-2000
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3 posted 06-11-2000 09:02 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~Ethome
beautifully expressed. long kisses
truly are all this and more. wonderful
poem.
take care.
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



kitkat
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4 posted 06-11-2000 09:15 PM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

(sighs) How beautiful you describe the long kiss. Makes me long for one myself
"burning with fire long after its over"
my favorite line.
A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 06-11-2000 10:41 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Oh, I feel I have been kissed by the dew of a rose...Your poem made me want one of these long kisses...with the meaning and love behind it!!!Too bad you can't buy them! I guess I'll have to wait for mine!
Janet Marie
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6 posted 06-12-2000 08:02 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

A long kiss can heal diminished duende
a soothing connection for those with a gift.
And words can't flatter those few precious moments
when there's time to enjoy true love from within.
-------------

*sigh*...
oh yes me friend ...you say it all with this line>>
"bringing glowing hypnotic waves from the chest."<<<

loooove that feeling...
lovely, tasty poem you have penned here.
later-lip-gator
jm


 And it's good that I'm not angry,
I just need to get over,
I'm not angry, anymore
Cry when you cry,
run when you run,
love when you love,
represent the ashes
that you leave behind
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


ethome
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7 posted 06-12-2000 04:55 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Thanks to - Lone Wolf, jmlee12345, Aimster, kitkat, A Romantic Heart, Janet Marie.
I appreciate your comments so much. I will be visiting you soon!
brian madden
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8 posted 06-12-2000 06:10 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

a beautiful poem, wonderful. someone kiss me, sorry your poem just got me in the mood, I guess I will have to get the mirror and the lip stick out. lol

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"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.

manic street preachers
"Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair"

"I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP

"And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity
Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see
And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway
It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper.

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


9 posted 06-28-2000 11:25 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Ethome, I missed this the first time around...thank goodness these are not purged, ever!

What a wonderful piece of work...left me warm and, well, really warm, really, really warm...

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

ethome
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10 posted 06-29-2000 12:00 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Thank you Brian for your upbuilding comments.

Thank you Sunshine for just being so warm.
SEA
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with you


11 posted 06-29-2000 12:24 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Ethome~ this is soooooo romantic! Kissing your love should ALWAYS be like this, even the quick ones!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


kat
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12 posted 06-29-2000 05:13 PM       View Profile for kat   Email kat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kat

Mmmmmmmm.. Long kisses are so wonderful. *sigh*  Yes they are soooooo wonderful. *sigh*


Oops! Sorry! I got carried away here.  

Um yes you really expressed it beautifully ethome.

kat
Jamie
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13 posted 06-29-2000 05:21 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

Where's the Bride?? I want to give her a good long kiss. Lovely Poem!

jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


14 posted 06-29-2000 06:00 PM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

They are the best ones now aren't they?  I suddenly find myself wanting one.  Great expression and a masterpiece of a tribute to one of the sweetest gifts of a love.
mariee66
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Whew!!  Someone call 911...it's smokin' in here!  Great poem!
Marie~
ethome
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16 posted 06-29-2000 11:56 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Thank you Sea for dropping in to read and for  the comments.
Thank you kat for your kind words.
Thank you Prometheus for stopping to comment, much appreciated.
Thanks Mark Bohannan for your comments.
Thank you marie66 for enjoying the poem and your final comment. Glad it affected you that way.
Paula Finn
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17 posted 07-26-2000 01:53 AM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

I went searching and what did I find? A kiss to tantalize and tempt my mind.....WOW ethome...

never say never
ethome
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18 posted 07-26-2000 02:24 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Paula you are such a sweetheart I don't know what to say except thank you for doing this.. ethome...
passing shadows
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thanks for reminding
 
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