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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Dynamic Duo's *Marge Tindal*~ Evening enveloping Daylight done Starry sky Soon Surrounds Waltzing way Across abyss Magic moon Dainty dance Horizon hovers Nighttime nestles Daybreak dawns Rising rays Signal sun Rising rapture Nature nurtures Earth evolves God gives Peace prevails *Inspired by LoneWolf* ~Thank you, gal~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Delightful duos, Poetically pleasing. Gracefully Giving Reader Reason To Totally Enjoy!!!!! Wonderful, Marge!!! I really enjoyed this one...truly dynamic you are!!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
what a dance? I am going to learn how to do it. a beautiful poem. wonderful and magical. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. manic street preachers "Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair" "I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP "And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper. ----- |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Marge~ What a dreamy poem! Excellent technique!  You make it look so easy, although I know that it is challenging, that just shows how much talent you have! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil' Lizzie~ Look at you go, girl ! Brian~ Put on your dancing shoes ! There's always room on the dance floor ! Melissa~ Thanks, hon. I saw a 'Two-fer' by LoneWolf in Open #7 and decided to give it a whirl. It was fun. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ I love it!! Amazing how you can say so much with only a few words, isn't it? You are very welcome for the inspiration. I am happy to inspire you and touched that you wanted to give it a shot. It is a fun form to use. I really like the assonance on the duos. Nice touch!! Lone Wolf |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Well, I appreciate the inspiration more than I can say .... But did you just accuse me of 'showing my assonance'?  Love ya'~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Absloutely amazing! Bright beautiful chick comes down delighting everyone extolling frivolous fancies giving gentlemen half-hearted images in jest just keeping kindred lads longing matrimony. Men need nuptials over other passionate pleasures quickly quieting racious rendezvous seeking sexual trysts, tempering urges until valiant vows win wedlock. Xerothermic xenophiles yearn youthful zestful zabaglione. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My Balladeer~ Sharp Show-off ! She surrenders Singing sweetly Sighing softly Salacious satisfaction *Oh, what the hell ... TAKE ME ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is Grrrrrrrrrrrrreat!!! Dynamic indeed !!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marverlous Marge An astounding.. Poem..perfectly Written with Ease..enveloping My mind Great Marge Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Gorgeous grace Lovely luminescence Rosy rapture Moving moments...Marge, stunning work, as always! *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ I'm glaaaaaddddd you liked. Tracie~ Watch you goooooo girl ! I love it. Krista~ You go girl ! Thanks all of you. Now you all see what inspired me ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Geez Marge, you make it look so easy. I'll have to start practicing a little more concise writing style. It's amazing how much can be conveyed through so few words. Inspiration trickling on down! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
AMAZING WORK! BEAUTIFULLY DONE! Regards, sudhir. My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself, Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night, Still there are the questions, no answers in sight Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor, Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door... You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange ~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Trew~ Thanks so much. It is really as easy as it looks and soooooo much fun. It's neat to play around with versatility. Give it a go ! Sudhir~ Thank you, kind sir. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
quite quintessential |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Perfectly penned, Majesticly molded, Delightfully delivered !!! Excellent Marge! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Thank you, my friend. Kit~ Thanks, lady. *I appreciate all the delightful responses to this piece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ this looks fun, but I think it would be hard to do, my muse is hiding from me lately. Loved what you did here! -SEA |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ I would never do such a thing!!!!! LOL....too funny!!! Was that what that was?? Thanks so much!!! ROFL.... LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Hey gal ... it's sooooo good to have you back in the fold. Nah ... not hard to do at all. Give it a whirl. LoneWolf~ LOL ..... heck, I don't know what you call it .... it's just purrrrrrty ! I think it might be more of an obliteration of alliteration ! But I liked your assonance comment! Love ya' gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Time to re-read Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
As usual a wonderful peice...i loved the title....it is penned perfectly!!!  Julie :) |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Delightfully dynamic Wonderful writing Eric Eric. < !signature--> "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. [This message has been edited by Eric Williams (edited 06-28-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunshine~ Thanks, gal ! JulieAnn~ Thanking you so much. Eric~Eric~ Smiling smiles serenely seeped ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
THis is yet another work of art Miss Marge..guess I'm not around enough to be of inspiration eh?? LOL Hope you're doing good woman...I KNOW you're smilin!!! Love ya!!Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DEVINA~ Girl .... do you realize that you are missed here ???? Well, you are. Now get it in gear and write some of that luscious poetry ! Love ya' my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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