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vandana
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0 posted 2000-06-11 11:06 AM


When I met you,
I knew,
I would love you,
Cause you're so beautiful,
So beautiful to fall in love with you,
Anyone will fall in love,
When they look into your eyes,
Your eyes are so beautiful,
Your touch makes me like
I'm in heaven,
Your smile is like a warming sun,
I want to run to you,
So I would be with you,
You're so beautiful,
You're everything
That anyone would make you forever,
Tal=ke my heart,
Take my hand,
I would never ask you for anything,
I would make you forever,
My love,
I give my heart to you,
Because you're so beautiful,
So beautiful that makes my heart go crazy,
I never would ask for anything,

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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
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1 posted 2000-06-11 11:29 AM




This poem reminds of the tender love song "You Are So Beautiful To Me" By Joe Cocker.  Your poem is beautifully expressed.  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-11-2000).]

shilpi
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since 2000-05-24
Posts 73

2 posted 2000-06-11 11:34 AM


Hi Vandana,
"The poem" is so beautiful !!!

regards, shilpi

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2000-06-11 02:56 PM


Vandana
THIS is so BEAUTIFUL! whomever
inspired you to write this lovely
work of art has indeed captured
your heart. i am happy to see that you
are happy and expressing it so lovely.
take care.
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

4 posted 2000-06-11 04:35 PM


Nicely done Vandana...  wonderfully written.
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