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The Robin
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The Robin |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I heard a robin sing today I listened to his song He seems to have a special word He wants to pass along He sings of new beginnings Of life that starts again He's telling me that love exists And there are special friends Friends that love you as you are And who are always there Who always have the time for you And let you know they care I sang back to that robin I knew his words were true For I have started life again The day that I met you. Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Peppermint~ Why, this is just adorable. How sweet the robin's song. You brought it to life. Enjoyed the read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this poem is lovely and special. it made me cry |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Peppermint ... I'll have to watch for more from you ... I absolutely adored this, lovely flow, lovely positive sentiments! Best wishes, /Kit |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I appreciate the input.....the kind comments. I felt lucky with this one too, it just flowed. Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Peppermint, this reminds me of a Poem I used to read my sons when they were tiny. It was about a little bird  Great read ~Heather |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a beautiful song that you have penned for us! This is very sweet, innocent, carefree and full of love Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a beautiful poem, romantic and sweet as the song of a robin. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. manic street preachers "Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair" "I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP "And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper. ----- |
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