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~For Jillian~ (He's all around you)
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~For Jillian~ (He's all around you) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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If you look real close There's a ray of light shining just for you And in the sky a thousands clouds But only one the palest blue If you look into the night sky There's many a twinkling star There's one twinkling just for you And it's the brightest one by far When the summer breeze blows your way And brushes gently across your face You'll know that it has finally found It's resting place Gentle is it's touch Graceful it is with ease For it is you and only you It's spirit wishes to please So everywhere you look You'll find some sort of sign That your heart and soul is healing Throughout the passing of time Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Hon, this is very comforting. I trust Jillian has found that peace. What a wonderful friend you are to ease the loss of a friend. Beautiful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Tracie, this is really beautiful!  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was so touching, gentle and comforting Tracie ... a wonderful healing verse! Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
tracie this is EXCEPTIONAL and EXQUISITE ... your most beautiful perfect poem wonderful sentiments and expressions this is indeed a perfect and comforting tribute. you took your writing to a new level with this beautiful, gentle poem. loved it!! later sweet-gator jm And it's good that I'm not angry, I just need to get over, I'm not angry, anymore Cry when you cry, run when you run, love when you love, represent the ashes that you leave behind ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Tracie,....wow, I'm not really too sure what to say except that this is absolutely beautiful. I find it comforting and wish a peaceful heart to you. Thank you for sharing this...very well written. Take care. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~tracie this was spellbounding and beautiful. this poem left me at total peace. thanks ever so much for sharing. and i agree with janet, this definitely took your writing to a new level. beautiful work hon. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Tracie that was wonderful, lovely poem. Gentle is it's touch Graceful it is with ease For it is you and only you It's spirit wishes to please So everywhere you look You'll find some sort of sign That your heart and soul is healing Throughout the passing of time ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. manic street preachers "Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair" "I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP "And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper. ----- |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
I'm feeling a little overwhelmed by all your sweet replies and I'm on the verge of crying but I'm holdong the tears back. I wrote this for my friend Jilly who's husband died last week of cancer I haven't given it to her yet but I will when the time is right. Thank-you once again for all your wonderful inspiring comments I love each and every one of you Luv Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Like I said, You've got a beauty all your own and it's shining here. Yea, I'm reading from the back of the book again. I picked that up in grade school. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Lucky~ Thanks buddy  I like to know that I can shine into someones life...thanks for taking the time to read this. take care Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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