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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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You were my rock, standing strong and true < !signature-->When did things change and go astray Everything I know I basically learned from you Things just seemed to fall apart that day I want to believe things are the same And I wish for a simpler time But this is cold reality, whose to blame? You make me feel like I'm committing a crime You built me up so high, you never asked me Thinking my hopes and dreams were the same as yours And now I have something in my life, that I will fight for You do not approve, you want to slam the door I love you so much, you are my Dad But for the first time in my life, I feel free You try to make things hard, make me feel bad And it makes me wonder, do you even see the real me If you would listen, you would understand I am the daughter you always wanted me to be But this is reality, we aren't in fairy-tale land Wishing we could bridge this gap, and you could see. "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 06-11-2000).] |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
If your dad is still on this earth, be glad and smile...my dad left me many years ago when I was but 23 and I miss him so...forgive him if he needs forgiving, love him if he does not seem to love you, and never give up hope...thanks for sharing your feelings tonight. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lorilei, thanks for your comment to this poem. this was really hard to write. i know how you feel. my mom died when i was 17. things have always been so close with my dad and i but this last year so much has changed. i just feel so lost. thanks again. take care. amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amy~ Hon, just try to remember that Dad's have problems adjusting too. Do stand up for what you believe in ... he will admire that in the long run. Just don't let it pull you two apart. Be understanding and I hope it will work out for you to get close again with your dad. *HUGS* to you, little friend. Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Amy, Before I light my pipe, let me say that your poem was beautiful. It did give me a sense of frustration and bewilederment. ~light pipe here~ Now, we men have been know to be a little stubborn on occasion. Try to remember, that for as long as he is with you in your life, you will forever be his little girl; you will probably forever be his life, and nothing will be good enough for you, in his eyes. From someone who has been there, please be patient with him. Good luck, Amy. Trew. I have been to see the world. Tasted life at every turn. And all the time your face came back to haunt me. -Chris DeBurgh |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I think many a "little girl" has experienced this with their father at one time or another Amy, you've expressed this well and brought back memories for me (please check your e-mail shortly). Excellent expression and writing Amy. Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 06-11-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
lots of good advice on this page amy-girl Trew speaks with wisdom ... letting go is very hard for parents, your dad had to "let go for two"... i know its hard to try to live up to their perfect little girl expectations ... but his motives are of love... patience, and communication and understanding is they key. most parents love unconditionally, in the end. we just want our kids to be happy... sometimes it takes us awhile to see YOUR dreams in place of OUR dreams that we had for you. give him this poem, it can be a starting point to helping him see who you are now love ya me |
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