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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458
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Reality comes in all different shades.. Shades of pure white when you know things are right... A slightly pink hue when the truth is starting to fade A scarey feeling that makes you feel almost afraid. A deeper shade of a hazy blue.. When the truth is beginning to slip away from you. A deep green color when reality is gone for good And you begin to do things you nomally not would. I've learned my lessons well dear friends So if you see a serious side to me Trust that it is only because I'm happy livng today. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
and I'm happy for you, Lorelei. In a world where so much uncertainty reigns, it's nice to find someone who's at peace with life, has a good marriage with a good man and is happy with oneself. You're a breath of fresh air. Don't ever change.....  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is perfect, love the use of the colors to enhance the emotions. wisdom in your graceful words. take care, jm And it's good that I'm not angry, I just need to get over, I'm not angry, anymore Cry when you cry, run when you run, love when you love, represent the ashes that you leave behind ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Alot of truth in this my dear, and how creatively you painted your reality. I like this much! So glad to hear you're happy too!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lorelei~ You exude happiness ... it's so nice to see. Loved your 'colors'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was lovely Lorelei ... I'm tickled "pink" reading this, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Marvelous poem! I am green with envy that you have found the one true love of your live and are so happy! I'm blue because I haven't!  |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Lorelei~ A painted poem. This is great! I love it!! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice to see you - showing your REAL colors, my friend..  |
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sarahC Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 84Michigan |
This poem really made me think of where my life is heading right now, slightly pink hue when the truth is starting to fade....a scary feeling that makes you feel almost afraid, these two verses sum up my life completely for me right now...thank you so much for sharing....Loved it!! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A colorful read It's nice to know that true happiness and peace can still be found....a treasure to behold Thank you for sharing this and for sharing your rainbow! |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
Thank You for your postive comments one and all...and for encouraging me to be me...Fantasy and play can be fun, but when you've been as deep into it as I once was, I'll take Reality any day now. Nan sums it up well..."showing your REAL colors". It's also interesting that I'm married to a man who is creative and we compliment each other well... [This message has been edited by Lorelei54 (edited 06-12-2000).] |
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