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Guardian Angel
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
I have an angel she sits on my shoulder, we've grown closer now that I am older. She comes with me wherever I lead, and lets me know when to do a good deed. She's followed me through life, the fun, the pleasure the heartache and strife. I never feel lonely with angel beside me, I know she's there, to help and guide me. I can feel her heart as it is mine, beating together in the rhythm of time. A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely sentiments Lorraine ... you are one of the lucky ones to have an angel to guide and protect you ... this was delightful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Lorraine this was beautifully expressed. brought a tear to my eye. i must be either really emotional tonight or reading some damn good poetry. i vote for the latter  i believe we all have an angel. it's just a matter of believing in things we can't see. thanks for sharing this. take care. amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Thank you, Kit! Thank you, amy! I vote for the good poetry. My eyes are shedding too! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Many of us write about having an "angel" watching over us, but I really liked how you had yours "sitting on your shoulder." That made for a very tender image in my mind. *sigh* Very lovely piece here my dear. Thank you for sharing.... "Fantasies enrich our lives to the fullest, but true satisfaction comes from creating your own story in the real world! Live out your fantasies & make a storybook with beautiful pictures for the world to enjoy! -poetFemme |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Lorraine,...this is such a cool poem. The thought of a little angel on your shoulder seeing you through all you do is just wonderful. Thank you for posting. Take care. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lorraine~ You wrote of a little piece of my heart. I always have an 'angel' sitting on my shoulder ... are we lucky or what? Love this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
poetFemmeFatale~ Thank you so much! SpitFire~ Thank you for your nice reply! Marge~ Lucky indeed are we! Thanks again! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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