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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia 
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IF If only in my dreams I can feel your touch your arms around me holding me tenderly. Letting me gaze into your eyes for ever lost, but found. Then let me dream. If wishes ever came true You would be here beside me at this moment. Listening to each others hearts whispering our affections till the end of the day. Then let me wish. If reality will ever exist There will come a place, There will come a time when we shall meet. So I share this dream with you, wishing with all my heart That someday this will be real. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 6-10-2000 |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is lovely KitKat ... gentle and wistful sentiments. Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Very nice KitKat .. enjoyed this one! Coco |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~KitKat,...thank you for sharing this piece of you. It's an extremely touching poem. Take care. *Peace. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful tender poem of longing Kit, well expressed emotions ... it has a calming relaxing effect as its read. very nice take care K, jm And it's good that I'm not angry, I just need to get over, I'm not angry, anymore Cry when you cry, run when you run, love when you love, represent the ashes that you leave behind ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KitKat~ Such longing, lovely thoughts. I like this a lot. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kit beautifully penned sentiments you have here my friend. i felt the longing and the wishing. lovely emotions! take care. amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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sarahC Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 84Michigan |
I really enjoyed this poem....if wishes only did come true allot of us would be so much more blessed....thank you for sharing.... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
If Only!! Beautiful KitKat! Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I believe that dreams can become real, lovely poem beautiful. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. manic street preachers "Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair" "I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP "And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper. ----- |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
Kitkat Very dreamy poem. love it  )"If only in my dreams I can feel your touch your arms around me holding me tenderly. Letting me gaze into your eyes for ever lost, but found. Then let me dream." Especially loved this part, and now I will dream some more in my bed... -nando- Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday... |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
A smile and a sigh... I enjoyed that! If only, indeed. Trew. I have been to see the world. Tasted life at every turn. And all the time your face came back to haunt me. -Chris DeBurgh |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a big small word! If we could just answer if. Very very well done poem. |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
KitKat~ A very enjoyable read! Well done!! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
IF ONLY I could write like you my friend! A beautiful flow of longing, desires and fantasies. Wouldn't it be nice if we could pull our dream man out of our dreams and bring him to life - oh If Only indeed. "Letting me gaze into your eyes forever lost, but found. Then let me dream." A beautiful oxymoron, a wonderful expression. Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
kitkat this was beautiful. I can say that I used to say the exact samething when I met someone on line. It was a dream and a wish to meet. We finally made it reality though and reality became that dream and wish come true. I loved your poem. kat |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Thank-you all for your replies. I have made so many new friends on line and it has opened up a whole new chapter in my life. "If" I could meet you all in real life what a marvellous journey I would Have.-------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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